I Pioneered the Internet Age in the Sailing World
我在航海世界开创互联网时代
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 184k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
75Chapters
1.7MReads
13.2kFlowers
9.7Score
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Reader comments 44
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The protagonist is too redundant. What I want to see is the changes brought to the world of pirates by the information age, not this tool man who only talks in his den.
Don't write about the harem, it will break down
The person Kebi is dating online can't be the most beautiful woman in the world who holds a mace! Goutouhahahahahahaha
Come on, write, don't want a harem. The behind-the-scenes flow is pretty good, but it's easy to break down when writing about a female protagonist, and it's hard to control this level.
It's really better not to write this at the beginning. What's the use of having parents back home? Go back to show your holiness? Or go back to cooperate? You can't go back to being an ordinary person, right? It's not for no reason why there are so many stories about orphans. They are alone, looking forward to a new future, and adjusting their mentality to face the new world. If you want to have a sense of crisis, wouldn't it be better to reincarnate directly into the system? Also come up with a trick to inherit the godhead, how many years ago? If this god is so powerful, he won't be beaten or killed. Damn, if you explain that it's the same level, then if a god of the same level captures the protagonist, then a bunch of gods of the same level can't calculate the protagonist with godhead, and they can't calculate Blue Star? And parents? The protagonist has become an orphan. Not to mention waiting for the Blue Star to be destroyed, if the protagonist wants to develop, he will encounter hostile gods, unless the protagonist hides and doesn't move. If Blue Star is not destroyed, it means that it has not been found. Then this emotional god is super-standard and will not be killed.
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The first chapter at the beginning is not that good. Later, I wrote about the phone bug charges and charging 600 a month felt very cheap. . I don't know what I think. Before I was transformed by the protagonist, I didn't charge a penny for phone calls. It's like if you go to work and the company provides meals for free, and then suddenly one day the company charges you 600 a month for meals. You still feel like it's a good deal. That's how it feels.
Commentary on Chapter 3: The Beginning of the Mobile Communication Era, written by Doujin Wushuang, "I Created the Internet Era in the Pirate World".
The author writes well, keep up the good work↖(^ω^)↗
Didn't she accidentally fall into the water?