
At the Beginning of the Frozen Fruit, Spider-Woman Gwen Chased Me
开局冰冻果实,蜘蛛女格温倒追我
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- 780k Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Film & TV Fanfiction
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- For men
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- 2y ago
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- Faloo
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Hao Longtao, such a terrible name
I only love the lotus that comes out of the mud without being stained, and the clear ripples without being stained, but the author only loves broken shoes and has rich experience, but HIV staining is not enough
I really hate this kind of plot where the system can obviously kill the other person, but the system wants to spare the other person's life, **
Green green green! Hat! Too poisonous! And the protagonist is humiliated every day! You have to be humiliated before you secretly fight back!
There are people who write American comics these days who want to practice Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu. You know, even if you practice this skill to the thirteenth level, you only have more than a thousand kilograms of strength, less than half the strength of a super soldier serum. This author is still blowing up the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu. His protagonist's physique is comparable to that of a naval admiral. I don't know what kind of strength will be gained by practicing that function.
Ennnnn I'm not saying that the fox monster is bad, but no matter how you increase the upper limit of combat power, it can only be compared with Naruto, Fate, and Warcraft. Ennnnn It's because you haven't woken up or they are too weak. Curry Stick, Full Star Noble Phantasm, Warcraft, Lich King, Frostmourne, etc. You can't even increase the combat power of the fox monster ten times.
**Author, a good hand of cards is played badly
Sabi stuff, the system requires wealth and desire points to upgrade the protagonist, so why not just awaken the ice devil fruit and go conquer Africa? You don't even dare to awaken your Devil Fruit, are you afraid that you will be exiled from the earth after freezing the city? You really have to wake up in the city, right? Then, even if you can achieve the awakening ability, you still have to go to school? You're so stupid, you don't have any vision, you think you have to go to school to grow? Wouldn't it be enough to recruit a few doctors to teach the protagonist later? Since the protagonist needs something similar to faith to improve, he can only improve himself the fastest by establishing a country or a religious country. There is a system and you are afraid of this and that. If it is not about destroying the world, does Gu Yi have the mood to care about you? The history of American comics is similar to reality. Indians were massacred and Japanese invaders invaded China, but Gu Yi did not take action. This author is really short-sighted, can he have some imagination when writing novels?
I won't be able to take a good look at Dazai anymore (?? Benefit?)
It's very cliche to always be bothered by ants over and over again and have no self-awareness. Secondly, you are weakening the protagonist more and more. Look at the basics of the same period as you and the strength of the protagonist. Now you are even afraid of Thanos who has six infinity stones.
Author, it would be better if you changed the name of the protagonist. What kind of bad name did you give the protagonist? Do you know how many people have the last name?
Think about it, in terms of interests, Otto doesn't want to rule the world, he only cares about his Kallen; and the protagonist doesn't want to rule the world, he just wants to live a peaceful life; and they all have the same goal, to buy rice and cheat, and there is no conflict of interest. Judging from Otto's character, he doesn't mind helping him as long as it doesn't delay his rescue of Kallen, let alone doing it conveniently, and Otto will definitely not do anything wrong after Kallen is resurrected. , Or even because he wants to protect Kallen, so he is probably staying in reality. Remember, Otto's purpose was never to question Kallen after resurrecting her. He just wanted to let Kallen live without any worries. Didn't you see what Apokalis said that Otto bought a world in which Kallen could survive at the cost of the complete disappearance of the concept of "Otto"? From this, we can actually see Otto's purpose.
I'm just speechless. It's written so well that I can memorize it. What kind of cool article is this? Are you afraid there is something wrong with your brain?
Devil fruits are not afraid of sea water, but of special factors
It would be great if I could kill the braised egg. Seeing this realistic annoyance is even more **** than the villain. It is annoying to read this in every novel. Everyone except him is a villain and everyone is dangerous.
Dragon Elephant Prajna directly crushes the protagonist. It was said earlier that more than 10 billion can go directly to the top, but later it was said that it cannot be improved, and it was still explained. I just want to ask you, what abilities of the protagonist are not given by the system?
I'm afraid this name doesn't reflect my real name.
If you want to wear a crown, you must bear its weight. Human beings are the protagonists of heaven, so they naturally have to go through hardships
Mystique is not Mystique, change it
This freezing ability is really not very well written. To prevent the increase of entropy is to stop time. Also, at absolute zero, quarks and even cosmic strings stand still, causing matter to collapse... And the protagonist eats alone, why not let the female protagonist practice kung fu to break the genetic lock?
It's outrageous to think about writing something that will change the world.
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