American Comics: Weaving Myths, Starting from Urban Legends

The story is quite interesting, but it has two shortcomings. The first is that there is only one update every day, which is too few. The second is that there is very little valuable content in each chapter, and most of the content is Tai Chi.

Otherwise, add some trump cards. You are now suppressing the protagonist's combat power. Anyone with a discerning eye can see that part of Azathoth's power is because he has no state of mind. It is not a state of mind. You are afraid that he will collapse after gaining strength. Oh my god, if you don't know there are other strong people, it is possible. After all, you are like the reality controller mural. He defeated almost everyone in the Marvel Universe. Only strong people will become more and more bored, do whatever they want, and think about committing suicide. The protagonist will not do that. He has become stronger again. You are suppressing his combat power. Stop suppressing him. Your corner has already entered the eyes of the top bosses. Lucifer Morningstar, DC, world ranking **. At present, the protagonist's trump card is really nothing that can be blocked. Root can only block the power. This

Just use the right amount of gags, too much is really watery

At first, I saw Urban Legend coming in, but then a Source Castle came inexplicably, and then Magneto from another universe came. After that, the Slit Girl would chat rationally with Zha Kang. . . The unknown and oppressive feeling of urban legend is completely gone.

I quite like this book, but since the author's eunuch was resurrected, the style has changed. It's no longer a role-playing style, and it's very watery and completely weird.

Recently, many chapters are about the author's self-pleasure. There are various humorous or inconsistent language descriptions, facial expressions, or exaggerations of a character's original action image. For example, Nick Fury is described as an extremely imbecile black slave, and there are many shows. The low-intelligence behavioral language, which takes up a lot of chapter content, makes the content of one chapter very small, and most of it is content that does not match the main line. This makes it difficult to see any progress in the plot in one chapter, and even the protagonist's part may not even be a quarter. Moreover, it is completely different from the original character image. For example, the description of Magneto's Li Gou thoughts is extremely dramatic. I think if these can be changed, it will look better. Of course this is just a suggestion, it depends on the author

In recent chapters, the protagonist's pretense is a bit awkward

For example, when Ancient One Mephistopheles and Dormammu worked together and were beaten by weird monsters, it would be interesting for the heroes and villains to cooperate with each other to fight monsters. After all, it would be boring to fight one alone. This is the fun of stitching monsters together. It's a pity that the protagonist can't transform into a Clow card magical girl

If others expect Superman. Then you can lie. Why do you think Superman came to Earth? He was sent here because his hometown was destroyed. Just like Planet Vegeta, as for the day that destroys the planet, of course it's Doomsday. As for how Doomsday came about, the paradox wasn't just about the choice of the Apostles. There are also those who secretly guide and deceive others. Many major events in the universe and the villains are born under the guidance of paradox. Or get a box garden frame structure

Are you sure a lizard-like incident won't happen? It doesn't matter if you cover your face, after all, New York has a lot of talent.

Dc blackened text comes as little as possible! You need to update quickly! Let's start with the ordinary villains and slowly develop them! Don't fight against Superman-level Gang, otherwise your combat power will collapse too much.

Author, you asked Gwen to always wear a spider suit and a spider mask on her face when she is at home and when she is private with the protagonist. Is that okay? Especially having Gwen wear a mask

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