
Pokemon: Revealing Ash's Road to Victory, Shocking the World
精灵:曝光小智夺冠之路震惊世界
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 544k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
176Chapters
4MReads
13kFlowers
9.9Score
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Reader comments 50
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6. How should I put it? It feels like the characters have changed. Everything has changed. . . . . . . . . .
If the hatching egg of the fantasy Pokémon is not given to Ash, it would be really boring if it were given to someone else. In the Pokémon world, not to mention comics, there are TV animations, and Xiaozhi saves the world every time. When was there not a narrow escape from death? This is not a simple script. Please those smart guys don't erase Xiaozhi's achievements easily. In China, not to mention the red ones, Xiaozhi is the most popular. I get angry when I read inventory novels with original protagonists, especially the elf-double comparison novel, which directly replaces Ash's credit with a protagonist.
Ninja is so special that he can't lose. If he loses in the anime, it's entirely because the producer is sick. I hope the ending will be changed if I write this!
But some of what you wrote does not need to be exactly the same, but it can be more reliable, okay? In today's update, Xiaozhi used Hupa's aura to summon Lugia, and Evil Thought used seven auras to summon seven mythical beasts, including two Dialga. Can it be more ridiculous? Although it is a cool article that can be read without thinking, but this at least was written with a little more care.
Painted skin is a characteristic, how come you turned it into a prop or a skill? Funny
The writing is a bit funny, but the performance is like a primary school student writing a composition.
Please open up your mind a little bit. Is the mythical Pokémon a legendary Pokémon? Don't always use the word god. Others use first-level divine beasts instead, but you can't understand it directly using gods. And you can see if the original work stipulates that mythical beasts cannot be used. It's okay if you open up your structure a little bit, but why don't you have a structure? Why can't the Pokémon that Xiaozhi worked so hard to collect come on stage?
Dakdo, you are exaggerating too much and there is something wrong with it.
To be honest, there is absolutely no difference between your book and the first one. There are many mistakes, characters, the order of events, and the fact that everyone is optimistic about Alchemy Emperor, but he is the only one who likes it, and other champions are so blind, aren't you just being funny?
The plot is basically all wrong. Mewtwo ran away on his way to the new town after Xiaozhi finished the Evergreen Gym. When Dr. Oak traveled through time when he was young and met Xiaozhi in the Johto area, would he not know that Pikachu hates evolution and characteristics? There was only one month left to go to seven gyms. You should know that Xiaozhi basically stayed in each gym for a few days, and there were other towns and wild places on the way. It took more than a month no matter how you calculate it.