The Determined, the Undetermined, and Beyond Time

I am not a professional book reviewer. I only express my personal opinions and do not want to start a fight. As for novels, dialogue novels, pure dialogue novels are rare in Fei Lu Nan's novels, maybe because I read less of them. I personally define this novel as a male novel. Of course, I only use the dialogue between Yunming and Nangong Lin as the basic structure and form of expression. It mainly relies on narrating events, developing plots, explaining the environment and portraying the images of the two people in the dialogue between the protagonists. The preliminary background of the plot should be enough. Although it is not said to be profound, but in comparison, it is not a novel with ten lines at a glance. The scene switching in the text is a bit stiff, but we can't deny this to a new author. No one is born with this. Except for the first volume, the author is a high school student. His writing style is actually not very bad. It is definitely better than Xiaobai's. I'll take a guess. I mainly study literature, haha.

Hey guys, I refreshed it just after it was posted.

As the title says, If readers have any different opinions on the plot, character design, and narrative style of the novel, you can submit them to me, and I will accept them and make changes. I'm a newbie and I'm not very good at writing novels, so I'm counting on your help.

Commentary on the second chapter of Rin and "Spirit" in "Determined and Undecided and Outside Time" written by Dazai Lioyuki.