
I, the Beast King's Chief Instructor, Teach the Kaioken from the Start
我,百兽总教头,开局传授界王拳
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 5.1M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
2.3kChapters
14.9MReads
10.4kFlowers
9.8Score
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Are you kidding me? Vegapunk can't even reproduce Garp Sengoku's physique and abilities. How can he reproduce the abilities of a completely different system? And if you mean to recreate the physique, I can understand it. After all, the ability of the Devil Fruit is strictly speaking, it changes the physical structure of the user. And the Demon Penetrating Light Killing Cannon is a skill like the weapon color. Just look at how outrageous Garp's domineering power is? If Vegapunk could replicate Skill Garp's ability, it would have been copied long ago.
Can this move be extracted from the blood factor? Then the world government doesn't want to kill strong men of physical skills like Garp.
Crazy to provide benefits to the enemy, he was crazy, and he also extracted the Demonic Light Killing Cannon Factor and Kaio Fist from the blood, which really made me laugh. I really thought of Vegapunk as Dr. Gero. Dr. Gero can create artificial humans that destroy the planet. Vegapunk should first understand the natural ability. In order to strengthen the enemy, just write it blindly. You might as well ask Vegapunk to create a Celluloid.
Are you serious about finding the magic light killing cannon move from the bloodline factor?
Although Flying Donkey novels require no brain to write or read, you are too brainless at first. You don't know anything about pirates. Let me give you popular science about the author. First of all, you didn't even explain where you were at the beginning, the beginning was messy, and the description of the Celestial Dragons was wrong. The Celestial Dragons have a very high self-esteem and don't even bother to breathe the same air as ordinary people, let alone play tricks on ordinary people. It's not that the United Nations has destroyed the crime, it's just the navy, and ordinary people have been captured and sent to repair bridges that will never be repaired. Looking at the original work, Hancock has never been played with. Even though he is beautiful, he just keeps her as a canary for fun. In addition, Tianlong is not a pirate running around the world. They will only appear in specific places, such as Fish-Man Island and a few trees, Mary Joa, and Marine Vando. Also, it is impossible for Kaido to recruit protagonists casually. Kaido is inherently immortal and crazy. He himself is very strong and does not care much about the strength of his subordinates. And he will only recruit
If the Tianlong people kill you, will they dare to save you?
The back part of this book is not very good. In order to make up for more words, the author has some advanced version, 2x Kaio Fist. Just write how much you can use it and it depends on your personal strength. There is no need for a plot like yours. You start high and go low, and you have a thinking bottleneck. It's a bit stretched.
Isn't this just the same thing as what the pirate navy invented in the past? If you start to gain an advantage, you will definitely be possessed by the enemy later. Even if there is a new invention, it will be possessed by the enemy within a few chapters. If you write it like this, the protagonist will be useless. Anyway, if you have it, I will soon have it. Who cares about where the protagonist is? ←_←
Let's not talk about how to learn the Demon Penetrating Light Killing Cannon when you are not angry. Even Piccolo could only fire the Demon Penetrating Light Killing Cannon twice in the early stage. He relied on the Ship King to fire two consecutive shots. He was so out of breath that he even wanted to use the Kaio Fist. There's really no logic at all.
This is forced. Cell has the genes and hasn't learned Kaio Fist. You just have the blood.