Fantasy: Forcefully Marry a Saint and Create an Immortal Fairy Clan

The tribesmen were beaten and abused, but they didn't take action. When their wives were abused, they didn't take action. They didn't interrupt until the wife was about to be attacked in a life-threatening way. There must be a limit. It's fucked up and there are still people who write like this. I used to be scolded for writing like this.

Tell the truth. It's not that we can't accept the protagonist taking the villain route. But a good villain must have charisma, otherwise he will just be pure evil. So far it's really just been the Dark Lord for the Dark Lord's sake. I guess few people except those with truly dark hearts can stand it...

When the enemy comes, every time the elders below are beaten to death and injured first, and then the protagonist appears, where did he go before? You just deliberately show off at the end to show off, right? This is the same routine after reading so many books, and you feel uncomfortable if you don't undermine others, right? How old is your author? Do you think this is a cool plot?

The concubine in this novel is just a tool for giving birth to a baby. She has no emotional description at all and no temper at all. It makes readers feel like they have married a puppet. The writing is stiff.

It's so fake. I want to match the king. I can see at a glance that the opponent is a low star. I have to fight for a long time to doubt it. I don't understand how to tell the difference. He is stronger than him and his momentum is not weaker. As soon as the author came up to the opponent, he said, how can you beat me at the fourth level when you are a level one in Shenhai? It's quite funny. You can tell the difference at such a high level, so why don't you know everything and be omnipotent?

Why is your protagonist so angry and furious at the same time? Can't we use a few ultimate moves to help the heroines defend themselves? Do you have to come out only when you are desperate every time?

I found that this kind of novel, as stated in the introduction, is impossible for you to read.

A saint from a dynasty family makes me laugh so hard, you might as well write about Tianjiao

It's really frustrating to watch. With such crushing strength, you have to use a few tricks to hit anyone. The instant kill mentioned in the title has never been fulfilled.

Is it possible that an individual is stronger than the protagonist? The protagonist has so many talents, but the plug-in is not as good as a human. How fast is it? ? What a waste, a contradiction! ! ! Aren't the spies in the spiritual world provoking people? No cause and effect? Can it still develop into a giant force? What can you do to gather countless people? Fortune telling? ?

Every time I see the protagonist appear, I feel the same, because the order of appearance must be that the wife takes action and is raped. The protagonist, Shanshan, arrives late at the critical moment, must be ridiculed, must be slapped in the face, and says "dare to take action against my woman", while cutting watermelon. This order is fixed, as if the protagonist will die if he appears early. And the protagonist really treats his wife like a sow, deliberately writing it as if they are very willing to give him a child without any complaints? ? ? It is completely a fertility machine. You must know that giving birth to a child is not as easy as eating and drinking water. The relationship between men and women is too strange.

Not to mention anything else, just one wrong data is unbearable. Mistakes happen every three or five times, and you go backwards. After receiving the reward, you forget about it. The previous chapter was five levels, and the next chapter becomes three levels.

For boys, it starts with Tian, ​​and for girls, it starts with Xin. ? One, Ye Zhixin, two leaves, Zilan, three leaves, Zhiran, and four leaves, Zifeng. These are the first four, I'm too lazy to look at the others. This is the beginning of your life, the beginning of Xin? .

Look at what's written, it's all so wild and unconstrained, it feels like you're either going to kill this thing or that thing instantly, and then you still have to make up the word count? Another layer of sword power and two layers of novels. How long have they been in the novel and they are still being cooked up? I am a little convinced that the instant kill can still write several pages. What about the martial arts and the name? Is it a unisex name? The names of both men and women made me forget after reading a few pages whether it was a boy or your daughter?

You have to be careful when fighting against the ninth level of Conferred Gods against the seventh level of Conferred Gods. You have so much talent, all wasted. Even if you put it on a pig, it's better than you.

I'm thinking why not arrange some family guards, guardians and the like to be placed next to the children? Anyway, do you have to go to a desperate situation or take revenge afterwards? Can't you hit the family master with a critical hit?

It's watchable but not good. The plot is cliche and makes me uncomfortable.

I never understood what the rewarded bloodline constitution fragments were used for.

This is not writing a novel, but explaining it. There is almost no dialogue, it is all explaining.

What is the difference between Consummation and Dzogchen? Is perfection not round enough? Is there a **% above 100%?

I started to have trouble understanding Zhong Kyushu when I wrote it. The previous part was quite easy to write.

Deliberately suppressing combat power, although artistic conception and skills are important, realm is always the foundation.

Why are the skills related to me so obscene? I am a good person! Jie Jie Jie! With ten times stronger strength, he should be regarded as a decent person!

How much did it take to play the mythical beast at the beginning of 1? It made me bloody, and the mythical beast turned to play again. What kind of character is this? 2 The Chosen One, just get 130 for level 0 and no level. The players are making such outrageous noises. There is only two words of announcement and no content. What's the fuss about? 3. The virtual helmet is so useless, it has no senses!

**The author updates quickly, updates quickly, updates quickly

Earlier, your best friends were still saying that several thousand yuan was equivalent to a month's salary, but later they were telling you to make a list of updates, to do big stunts, to become a hero?

One third cannot be read... Is the author doing this for fun?

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