Anime Crossover: They Gave Me a Suicide Squad System, Then a Chat Group

"It is benevolence to like childish lolita and pity the lonely and weak; It is righteousness to like young and beautiful girls and be willing to accompany them as they grow up; If you like a young woman with Cao Wei's character, you don't pretend to be married or not, that's sincerity; Like mature women If you like a mature woman, don't give up on her as you get older. If you like a second-dimensional wife, it would be wise not to resist her because she is not from my world. Therefore, Sepai has five virtues: benevolence, righteousness, sincerity, perseverance, and wisdom! "

It doesn't matter if Rise is dead, but Yoshimura Aite is also dead? Is this a dead girl?

The overall writing is a bit boring, the sentences in some places do not make sense, the battle description lacks tension, and the character communication is sometimes slightly awkward. The setting is okay so far. Although it is not top-notch, it is still reasonable. There are no big problems with the story structure. It can make people motivated to read. I hope the author will work harder and improve his writing skills. Some parts are really dry and boring, such as the battle with the gecko. There is almost no description of the battle, and the gap in strength is huge. It is understandable to directly crush it, but there are many places in that paragraph that are not very smooth to read, and it is also boring to watch.

The author makes a suggestion: when writing a variety comic, don't incorporate too many variety comics. Various world views are different. It's as chaotic as a pot of porridge. It makes my head hurt to read it. The heroine is just like a passerby. One pops up at a time, and I can't finish collecting stamps. Just integrate those with similar worldviews and timelines. There is no need to integrate all anime.

On a planet the size of the sun, do you need to fly across countries? How many years will it take to fly?

The writing is too poor and there are too many typos. If there is no progress, the writing will not be long.

One mouthful of aliens, and then killed Kamishiro Riyo and Yoshimura Aite, so Touka and the like are obviously no longer needed. Then why did you add ghoul? Don't accept any girls, kill them all, they are sick, right? No wonder you got bad grades, you deserve it

There is a poisonous point that I personally feel, it feels a bit licking*. I give out all kinds of good things to many anime heroines before I am familiar with them. I can give them to a bunch of dead men under my command. Just because I am a heroine, I can enjoy the benefits? It felt very **. I was halfway through watching the hero and Gabriel fighting the dragon. After the hero fought alone, Gabriel was still using other people. The hero saved their lives and took things and danced for a while. Then I saw Kaguya giving him a Dragon King potion when he met for the first time. You poisoned the girl directly. You don't have any dead soldiers yet, so you can give it to someone you don't know very well. It has the feeling of the ancient sand dollar urban rich second generation. The prodigal son and the licker are fortunately the protagonists. If I had a different perspective, I would have thought he was a different kind of bitter villain.

I said, author, could you please re-check when you write? If your writing is not bad, you have a lot of typos and messy punctuation, which makes me upset.

A planet the size of the sun, brother, do you know how big it is? Especially if you go abroad, even if you go out in the country, you have to take a rocket. You will never leave the village for the rest of your life. Can you use your brain to write a book? There is also the game of ghouls. Do you think this weak chicken race can survive in this world dominated by humans? If a passing boss discovers this race, he can completely wipe it out with a little effort. I don't know what the author thinks about it. Can you use your brain more before writing a book?