Comprehensive Martial Arts: People Are Cultivating Immortality, Join the Martial Arts Chat Group

There are no time travellers. The tone of voice of the supporting characters is so modern, and the way they speak is similar to some people surfing the Internet. This is a major poisonous point of chatting.

I want to know that you wrote that you have raised Jianqun, does that mean you will not accept Little Dragon Girl? Now I just want to read novels about beauties. The rest is redundant. Also, can we not use NC characters like those weak Z characters and only write plots set in the original novel? You've traveled through the original work, so it's not like you ruined it. In the original novel, men can only be trampled and toyed with by you, while women are all taken as your own. That's what makes it interesting. I don't understand that these NC authors write novels and still follow the original works. Funny? No consciousness at all.

What nonsense, middle-aged Huang Rong is not a good person. Just because Guo Fu liked Yang Guo, Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu were separated for sixteen years, and the world couldn't talk about the master-disciple relationship. How dare Huang Laoxie's daughter say that? Guo Fu accidentally injured Yang Guo's arm? Whose accidental injury is this?

Overall, it's okay. It's different from other Yue Lao novels of the same type, but there are a lot of small flaws that I don't like. For example, the protagonist and the heroine are both cultivating immortals. Why give birth to children so early? It's not about having many children and many blessings. Also, the protagonist's sect is not lovable. Such a strong golden finger is just to give them face. The protagonist is so old that he has to kill the supreme elder. If he doesn't have various resources to train him, he will be forced to face the wall. Why is this sect sitting around?

I guess Yao Yue is also from the Ming Dynasty, right? Even if they are not in the same world, the historical trend is similar. No matter which version of the Peerless Twins, the background is the Ming Dynasty. How could he not know Zhu Yuanzhang and what happened behind his history? Her time period is probably in the middle to late period, and it is necessary for the protagonist to tell Zhu Yuanzhang about the bad things about Zhu Di and Zhu Yunwen. There are loopholes and contradictions in this period.

The front is very good. Once animation appears, it goes off topic. You can include modern, film and television, and more martial arts. It should be fuller. . . As soon as the anime came out, wouldn't all this fighting power go astray?

I just had a sudden impulse to read the author's other books, and found that the one about Saiyans having many children and many blessings is pretty cool. I'm thinking that if the chat skirt system is combined with the many children and many blessings system, then every world can have the bloodline of the protagonist. The protagonist's bloodline spreads throughout the world, achieving the myth of creating countless human races with the power of one person. Tens of millions of years later, with the snowball development of the population base, the protagonist may have become the ancestor of the human race in all the worlds. This feels very refreshing. I wonder if anyone has written like this.

After reading some, I always feel that there is too much content about the world of cultivating immortals?

I don't want the writing to be too watery. A novel must be of high quality to be a good novel and to become a classic novel.

In addition to pretending to be a great person, other aspects are also good

Plus the three useless goddesses of heaven and earth

Weird, I forgot everything I wrote

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