Genshin Impact: I Became a Star God in the Original Demon Simulator

The description of the mind is too weak. The protagonist became distracted and could reverse the situation in an instant, but he used the most outrageous method to let his woman die first, then change the timeline, and then travel to 500 years later. Wouldn't you be crazy if you didn't follow the original plot? Still can't write? It's so painful to describe things that can be easily solved in life, but you brought them down in such a direct way. Your book could obviously be written more concisely, but it ended up in this situation where the wife and children were separated. I hope that when you describe it, you will think about the plot carefully and check the setting before writing. Writing novels must also be based on a kind of logic.

Comparing the simulated Star God of the protagonist in this book with the real Star God of the Star Dome Railway, it is actually the weakest level of Commander. It is the kind of Commander that does not even have the ability to explode stars. It is on the same level as Doommon, a weapon that is designed to destroy planets.

I'm afraid this Star God can't even defeat the Doomsday Beast.

The Demon God War is just a ceremony to select the seven gods. The other demon gods were not driven out by the laws of nature. Guoba and Red King, Orobas, Osel, and Baqing did not die in the Demon God War. The Red King himself killed himself and also implicated the Tree King. Guo Ba was because of the resentment of the demon god who died because of the Demon God War and the abyss crisis detonated by Kanrea. He died protecting Liyue. Orobas also went to find Shadow and committed suicide because he knew something he shouldn't know. Osel was also sealed by the Rock King until the plot period. After the War of the Demon God Baqing, he lived in the ocean for thousands of years. The other Demon Gods also just went to the open sea, or merged with the territory and changed their lives like the Wolf King.

To put it bluntly, I just don't know how to tell the story and don't bother to check the information. Do you know how powerful the Star God is? You started writing without even understanding it?

"In reality, weapons such as the A47 can be reproduced and equipped with a division in an instant. Even if God comes, we will not be afraid!" I barely believe it if you say it is a nuclear bomb... You mean AK??? …

The promotion of the Demon God means that the Star God really has you.

I couldn't even remember my own settings, so I taught Yingmei a lesson with a small one that looked exactly like me, but after switching to a large one, we were still able to sit and chat and laugh together, tsk, 6.

Inazuma's three-element traveler couldn't defeat Bengbeng's foul-mouthed hat, and Shenzi didn't want to do it directly, so he exchanged it with the Heart of God. Therefore, it can be inferred that these big monsters like Shenzi are basically equivalent to executive officers, or immortals, or demon gods, which are lower than the level of demons like the first three seats. How come your big monster has been strengthened at the epic level? It is directly comparable to the devil. Even if you press the space button to fast forward, you won't have to take a few glances at the plot.

Haven't you seen the design of Renren's Planet Railway? Only when you reach a certain height in the field of philosophy and create new philosophy can you become a new person, and if you become a new person, you will be bound by the driving force. What the hell are you talking about? You, the star god, can still level up. Isn't that outrageous? And doesn't the Taotie mind already exist? This is a thinking black hole. What the hell are you talking about? And the King of the End is not dead either.