A Wuxia Chat Group? I'm a Xuanhuan Powerhouse!

After reading a few chapters, I found problems 1. The protagonist goes through a time-traveling battle and changes his name randomly. It makes my brain hurt to read it. Of course, this is a small problem. 2. When the protagonist receives the invitation to chat, his first reaction is disgust and rejection. Those who know that the protagonist is a little shrimp, but those who don't know think that the protagonist is a grandma who can see through the nature of the chat at a glance. If you can't see through the nature of the chat, let alone join directly, but it is impossible to refuse, because this may represent a great opportunity. 3. Chat sites usually have functions such as time travel. The protagonist actually wants to exit the site and can run away when in danger. 4. Time-traveling, early stage, becoming Yunshan, is it a good start for Tianhu? First of all, Xiao Yan is not an ungrateful, mean-spirited, glare-at-me, I-kill-your-family-type protagonist. In Dou Po, except for Han Feng, there are no early villains who have a mortal blood feud with Xiao Yan. Even if the protagonist doesn't do anything, waits for the three-year agreement to pass, doesn't take revenge with death, doesn't deal with his family, nothing will happen. You can even go to the Warcraft Mountains, meet Xiao Yan by chance, and then appreciate his hard work, talent, and person, accept him as a disciple, teach him carefully, and find that he has a good talent for alchemy, and then the protagonist happens to know two strange fires, and then help him take your Qinglian Earth Heart Fire, and tell him later He told him that there was a fallen heart trap in Canaan College that could speed up his cultivation. He then told him that during his early travels, he discovered the secrets of Canaan College, the two different fires and other information. He rushed there on the grounds that Canaan College could help Xiao Yan practice. After that, the protagonist could lie down and wait for Xiao Yan to take him away. 5. The protagonist has traveled through time and has not yet come into contact with the elders of the Soul Palace. He is the one manipulating the protagonist's soul.

The protagonist changed the name of the chat ** to a fantasy boss. It was very funny. In ancient times, who knew you were a fantasy boss, and you were still fantasy? Fantasy is created by us people in the 21st century. If another modern person joins the chat**, it will not be obvious at a glance that you are a time traveler.

Is the protagonist really a time traveler? Apart from anything else, Fengyun's later stage is no worse than Dou Po, and what's the big boss? If nothing else, in Dou Po, not only is the Soul Emperor level one, but it is at least the Soul Palace Master level, right?

Whether the protagonist pretends to be a god roller or not, I don't care. One or two are just like retarded.

It's boring not to open a harem and show off to others every day. Too much food is tasteless

I knew it was martial arts chat** and wanted to quit. I really want to know why? The ability to travel to other worlds alone is a life saver. No matter how bad things are, you can still stay in that world and dominate. .

You are already a big shot, why do you have to show off to a bunch of martial arts warriors? He was the boss at the beginning, and he even pretended to be a martial artist. No strength

From Ling Ying's words, we can know that Yunshan's strength is much different from that of Yun Potian back then. "I'm afraid that Yun Potian's reputation, which he worked so hard for back then, will be lost in your hands." According to this, we can know that Yun Potian was very eye-catching in the world during his peak period. So he is basically in the realm of Dou Zun.

I read Chapter 45 in my free time, and the plot was barely okay, but it was so long-winded that it gave me a headache. The characters in the plot speak one or two lines of dialogue, and the narrator provides at least ten lines of commentary. Some things are just fine if you say one or two sentences, but it has to be done in ten or eight sentences, which is really annoying. It's like watching a movie. You press pause after watching three seconds of the scene, and then add more than ten seconds of movie commentary. Tell you what the character's words in the movie mean, what the profound meaning is, why this shot was shot in this way, what light and shadow reflect the character's current psychological activities, and what they imply. Continuity is torn to pieces.

Isn't the world of Xiongba very deep? Even an outrageously powerful person like Demigod! There may even be something like the Great Sun Tathagata in the back! Isn't this enough?