Invincible, truly lazy protagonist, God's-eye view, behind-the-scenes power development, traditional cultivation
In a world of martial artists, the strong rule. The powerful leisurely watch the flowers bloom and fade in their courtyard, while the weak struggle against the current, teetering on the brink of disaster. This book follows an invincible old ancestor, drifting leisurely through the world and idly watching the younger generation's adventures, living a laid-back life... I've read plenty of novels, but never found a satisfying power fantasy, so I decided to write my own.
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to actual persons or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
After reading more than a dozen chapters, the main character appeared a few times, and it was all about Lin Fan. Reading the book, this is the result of watching the ancestor, it is all from Lin Fan's perspective. It's boring to death. It's better to read other books.
To be honest, I didn't have the idea to read it just because of the introduction and table of contents!
It is very bad if your realm has the highest setting. If your cultivation exceeds this realm, the world order will collapse. Can you survive the collapse of the world? ,, This is really bad,, after all, there is no end to the road, you are equivalent to easily interrupting the promotion path of everyone except the protagonist. Of course, I only saw the first one, and I don't know if there are other settings later.
When I read Chapter 10, I saw that Lin Fan actually traveled through time. Am I right? Holding the template of Xiao Huohuo, living the plot of ancient fantasy novels
The description of the dialogue in Chapter 3 is a bit stiff, there is only stiff dialogue, the details are not described enough, and the expressions and emotions of each are not felt, so the author is probably a novice, and your Lin Fan is a bit inconsistent. When he recognized the reality, he was a bit shocked, and the protagonist also said that his character was a bit lacking. But when he later found out that something hot had sucked his spiritual energy for several years, which made him so low, you didn't say what emotions he had, and he was quite calm. You asked him not to suck it anymore. There is no mention of his anger or hatred here. You must know that any other person would be very angry, and even this can achieve the goal of blocking the road, and he will not stop until death. This contrast is too big. If a person has enough xinxing, he can indeed face it calmly. But you have said before that his xinxing is not enough. If you still act like this, it is a bit unrealistic. You can change it appropriately.
Write more about Lin Xuan, otherwise you won't even know who the protagonist is
Commentary on the first chapter of "The Ancestor of the Salted Fish of All Realms" written by Decadent Youth No. 2: Lin Xuan, the Ancestor of the Sect.
But can you tell me why the rules are written as "fa"?
The point is that Lin Fan's cultivation level is improving too slowly, and there is a big gap between him and King Wu.
Commentary on the third chapter of "The Ancestor of Salted Fish from All Realms" written by Decadent Young Man No. 2: The Appearance of Grandpa - Mr. Yan.