Three Kingdoms: War God Lu Bu Guards Yanmen Pass from the Start

I saw that the fourth generation and the fourth male were not tense. There is no such thing as the fourth male. There has always been only the third male. The fourth generation and the third male means that four generations have achieved the position of the third male.

To be honest, I personally find it disgusting that the rewarded ability actually has a CD time. Either you write it as an explosive skill, and use it to consume a lot of physical strength. The time it takes to recover physical strength after it is over is stronger than the cooling time. At least it feels more realistic. As a result, after you use a skill, it has to be cooled down for 48 hours before you can use it again, which is a bit strange.

The first book. Many don't understand. I have been working hard to code. Hope you all will like it. Promise to stick with it. I will write until the end of this book. This book promises to only write stories about the Three Kingdoms. There will be no other stories about traveling through dynasties or fairy tales.

Don't write anything and turn it into a fairy tale

How can I put it? In terms of writing and plot, it's a little lacking but it's okay. Typos are the big problem. How can I put it? Overall it's pretty good. Come on.

When I first watched it, I felt something was wrong. After watching the latest one, I remembered that Lu Bu was from Wuyuan, and the governor's office was in Taiyuan. I want to say that when writing about the Three Kingdoms, you still need to look at the map...

I have saved about 300,000 words. Hope you guys will like it. I will stick to finishing the book. This is the first time in my life that I have written a novel on a platform. No experience. Please forgive me for my poor writing.

Commentary on the first chapter of Xiaodao Gang's debut book "Three Kingdoms: God of War Lu Bu Guards Yanmen Pass" Chapter 1 Traveling through the Three Kingdoms, God of War Lu Bu chapter review.

I remember that Lu Bu fought against the Xiongnu and Xianbei. It seemed that he mainly fought against the Xiongnu. Please point me out if I remember wrongly.

The author has changed his writing style. This article is like reading a text. It is dense and dense. Break it into more paragraphs. Your reading effect is too poor.