Honkai Impact 3rd: I Asked You to Make a Movie, but You Brought Elysia?

Don't write what should be written. Skip all the part about Star Core Cocolia. It's nothing. It's not hot-blooded. It's just plain boring. If you don't know how to write, don't write it. Such a good subject is wasted.

Is there any possibility that writing out the exciting parts of the original plot in the game would be better than the few lines of dry text you, the author, have written? Also, I still don't understand which country they are from. Could it be that the author wrote all the characters as domestic, right?

Your theme is collapse, and most readers come in because of this. Movies are just a way of describing it. Collapse is the prerequisite. In other words, if what you are writing is not about Honkai Impact but an ordinary movie article, the readers who are coming in now are obviously not from the same track, but a different group of people. But here comes the problem. The theme of Honkai Impact is the plot, which means it focuses on the plot related to Honkai Impact. But as said in the comment section, you can hardly describe the specific content of the movie. Not only that, there are too many routines in entertainment articles, such as hot searches to compete with awards traffic, etc. Not to mention that I have long been tired of reading these and there is nothing new. If you think about what you have written so far, does it feel at all inconsistent to change Alicia and others to ordinary names such as Su Qing? Can it be treated as an ordinary entertainment article? I can understand what you want to write, but the method must be corrected. What you have written for the time being gives the impression that it is just like an ordinary entertainment article, and the sense of excitement and expectation is not very good. It is recommended to read similar animation, entertainment or live broadcast articles to see what others focus on. I remember that there are several books about playing Honkai Impact games in the Honkai Impact world, which are very similar themes. I suggest you read them.

Beng Er also has several big scenes

To be honest, although it is fast, the plot of this movie is really poorly written.

It's none of my business. If you write poorly, it's because you have poor grades, your writing skills haven't improved, and you're following a routine and won't change. It doesn't matter. I just don't read it. Ninety-nine percent of the authors of Feilu are unworthy and won't listen to suggestions. They're idiots and idiots who are mentally retarded.

A movie like Honkai Impact is definitely a big scene, and can better reflect the despair of the end of the world. For example, such as Fire Chasing Moth, Battle of Galan, Death Like the Wind, God's Sin and Eternal Doom, this can be split into two parts to write the eye of the universe. A series of movies can do this, first shoot an introduction, and this introduction serves as the basis. After all, the plots in the early stages of Honkai Impact II and Honkai III are not much different, and then divide it into two lines, or publish comics to complete the setting of Honkai Impact

This book has become useless to the extent that if he had to think about it properly, he would really want to abuse it properly. It would not burn when it should be burned, and it was extremely dull. I said that this would not be able to attract people at all, unless it was sold there. Or just hang out there with the girls you like.

If those lines are not written, there will be no feeling.

Every force in the world has been written about, Destiny, Anti-Entropy, Luofu, this and that. To be honest, I found it very confusing.