Comprehensive Comic: Building a Dimensional City Starting from the Blue Ribbon

The protagonist's character is super sexy and hypocritical, and the author also writes it as if he's mentally retarded! You don't need to create magic. Just like in the everyday world, you build houses and steal oil! What are your magical creations used for? From this we can see that the author is just a petty person and has no brains! Only those who starve themselves to death when food is everywhere

If the main character is female, don't put it in a male video.

The character creation is really poor, the characters are the same, not to mention reflecting the original character's personality, even the personality of a normal person can't be seen, and the setting is also poor. If you come up with a creative magic, you can create some small magic by yourself, then why do you need magic knowledge from other worlds? As a result, the protagonist later sees others using a convenient little magic and has to ask for advice. It is a failure.

I don't know why sometimes I always feel like the main character is a little bit licky.

Don't weaken the demon gods, otherwise it will be boring to watch. It's really boring to make a monkey version. Demon gods are not about authority. They are existences that reach the top with wisdom. They use infinite power and huge wisdom to perform their miracles. In the Demon Forbidden City, it is a myth that only existed demon gods. The phase was formed after the endless power and wisdom changed the world. The world has been changed beyond recognition, and the stories passed down have become myths. The last universe was easily destroyed. At the very least, it was a supercell. Of course, there is a gap between supercells that can easily destroy 100 universes in an instant. Those that can destroy hundreds of billions are still supercells. As long as they do not form an infinite infinity, they are not considered diverse.

Why would you go to other worlds to get crude oil after you have created magic? Do you think the air quality where you stay is too good and the smell is not strong enough, so you want some pollution?

It's not interesting. This type of protagonist is not interesting. The plot is boring. The protagonist himself has no shining points. The protagonist is too all-round. The character creation feeling is that except for the protagonist, they are all passers-by. The author needs to strengthen it.

It's almost winter. According to the original plot, I would have met several heroines, but now I haven't seen any of them.

I'm still writing, and someone is broken.

Emilia suddenly appeared, poisonous, direct benefactor, even more poisonous

Are there only one male protagonist and his harem in the city? Then I think it's better to build a dimensional home instead.

After seeing what the author wrote, we just want to sigh. He is another author of Douluo fan fiction. He is the kind of guy who scolds Douluo and Tang San for not being human, but his own protagonist's actions are even worse than those of Tang San, the original protagonist of Douluo.

I feel that Tianli is quite sad. The order of Teyvat, humans and demons were either created and constructed by Tianli or are derivatives of it. As a result, as time went by, I became ambitious and had ideas. Ever since the Ice Queen took in the survivors of Kanreia as her general officer, she still tolerated the doctor's behavior. One can see that their rebellion has no regard for the consequences. I feel that Tianli and Ti Ma are a bit similar, but not as miserable as the other. I used to think that Tianli is a tyrant and it is right for the Seven Gods to rebel against her, but with the update of the plot, Kanrea and the Seven Gods are becoming more and more clowns.

Tomoko has completely become a maid. You might as well make her the housekeeper of the dimensional city and take charge of the dimensional city. After all, Tomoko also has data on management, and you will have a lot of residents in this world. There is no need to accept residents in the Apocalypse world.

I checked a lot of information for your book. In the early 19th century, you could marry 18-year-old Qin Huairu directly in the countryside when you were 10 years old. All you need is a certificate of cohabitation. No marriage certificate is required. In those days, many people got married without a certificate. When Qin Jingru gets older, she can marry another one and raise her outside.

This guy is too pretentious and can compose a poem in seven steps. Is it necessary to write a poem, not to mention copying it? . . . . . . . . . . .

There is no hint of a harem, and I saw La Kwak in Chapter 7. I hope you keep writing and see you in the next book

I feel like the stronger the protagonist is, the villains in those dramas are almost the same as the protagonist.

It's obviously my favorite among the three books I wrote, so why did it become *?

Lao Yue is so cute, please write more about Lao Yue! ~

Rayquaza is not unique, the one in Hoopa the Movie is shining

The front is okay, but the mess behind is hard to understand. The Jade Emperor is actually more powerful than Taozu and he is drunk.

No more, Xiaoqiang, I depend on you for our lives. Chapter 27, you can't die! ! !

Sorry author, I saw a pretty good book before that gave away more than 800 flowers in monthly tickets and evaluation votes. Today there are only 83 flowers and more than 40 evaluation votes. If the quality is the same next month, you will get monthly tickets and rewards.

With 100 cubic meters of carry-on space, you can be a space transporter. Battle Fortress, the deployment of nuclear weapons in space depends on you. Destroying the United States is not a problem

I don't know what you wrote, it's a mess, the plot is all over the place, I can't understand it, and I can't connect it.

Can you imagine? Can you imagine a very beautiful person holding a sword or other weapon and stuffing it into his mouth?

A family story with a male protagonist at the beginning? Isn't this giving a stallion a reason to smile evilly? Jpg It is estimated that after clearing Naruto World, the family will still be two people.

It's the end of the world, so no use for planes, be wise.

The more you write, the more chicken eggs you write. What kind of chicken stuff are you writing about?