High Martial: Summoning Zhao Zilong of the Divine Wandering Profound Realm from the Start

The theme and plot are okay, but the sentences don't make sense and there are too many typos. The summoned historical figures are all Three Kingdoms figures, and the hierarchy of the Three Kingdoms figures is also messy.

Yan Liang, Wen Chou, a third-rate general, is on the same level as Xing Daorong? How much do you look down on the Four Court Pillars of Hebei Province?

As a grandson of the emperor, will you be retaliated against if you say even two words?

After reading a few chapters, it was actually written that Zhao Yun's Shenyouxuan realm might require more than a dozen moves to defeat the Ziziji realm. The Ziziji realm was still separated from the Shenyouxuan by a Xiaoyaotian, but the result was that he couldn't kill him instantly. So, would it take several hundred moves to defeat the Xiaoyaotian. Yan Liangwen is a third-rate general with ugly talent? If Zhao Yun is said to be first-rate, then they must be at least second-rate. Is the protagonist's second brother Zijun or Ziying?

Establish the underworld and heaven in a place where the royal family dominates?

In one word, coward, after other people are summoned by this system, they should steal first and grab first. Why don't you, a coward, be more decisive in your killing methods? As long as you don't do this for a few months, no one in Shenwu will be your opponent.

How does the author think that there is no such thing as soap and soap in the fantasy world? What about forged steel knives. The materials in the fantasy world are much better than the real world, right? Moreover, as your cultivation level increases and your brain becomes more developed, do you think that the technologies that are excellent now would also be excellent for them, but they wouldn't think of it?

Stop writing it. It starts from the first chapter. There are typos, and the last sentence is a name, and the next sentence the name has changed. You will be charged for this thing later. It's weird if someone reads it. You don't review it yourself. It's messed up.

I don't understand how my old father is not yet a prince, let alone an emperor, but his sons have actually started contacting outsiders to start killing. Shouldn't several brothers join hands to make the old father the prince first? Moreover, it will take another ten years for the emperor to abdicate, plus the old father has been the emperor for a hundred years, which adds up to one hundred and ten years. The old father can have dozens of brothers and sisters. Will he need hundreds of millions of spiritual stones to hire a killer? Even if we want to start killing, we have to wait until the last ten or twenty years! Otherwise, in the end, the old father would not become the emperor, and the brothers would no longer be able to fight, and they would all become enemies, and the whole world would be embarrassed.

What's wrong with authors nowadays? Novels about hegemony all like to give the protagonist a father. It makes me uncomfortable.