
Mixed Martial Arts: Talent Is Off the Charts, Others Practice Martial Arts and I Become an Immortal
综武:天赋爆表,别人练武我修仙
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- Completed
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- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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Would an ancient person like Xiaoyaozi say modern nonsense like "You're a bastard"? ? Just kidding, I really didn't feel a sense of empathy at all while reading this book.
Why are there so many battle prowess? It's really better than dragging the author out to have a fight to see who is stronger and who is better.
He doesn't even have basic respect, he just talks nonsense. Just reading the first few chapters makes me lose all desire to read further.
You don't have enough respect to actually lick Qiao Feng, a Khitan... I don't understand.
After reading twenty or thirty pictures, I was filled with doubts. First of all, how old is the main character? I thought he was a child at first, but three months after becoming a disciple, he met Li Canghai and started to tamper with him and speak in a pornographic manner. Wouldn't anyone think he was a pervert if he was young? It would be too unbearable for him to be an adult. Based on his subsequent performance, I guess he must be an adult. But generally, it is okay to only recruit children based on their talent, and the rest can be cultivated slowly, but doesn't accepting an adult as a disciple test the character and character? Also, you said that Li Canghai was over 300 years old, and Xiaoyaozi was also over 300 years old, but by the Tianlong period, the third elder Xiaoyao was only about 100 years old. What you said seems to be that Xiaoyaozi accepted disciples as soon as he started practicing. Do you think it is reasonable?
Although it's fantasy, you still have to have a degree, okay? In ancient times, respecting teachers and respecting morality. You thought it was a joke. Even if you are a time traveler and have privileges, don't think of others' writings as being brainless. You give people such a good impression.
The name of Pig's Foot God is too long and too tacky. God is God. He exists from eternity to eternity. He should be like God. He lives in the sky. Just call him Lord or God. Don't add any other name. Su Shen will be weak as soon as he hears it. He has no qualifications.
The protagonist is full of swear words, and he doesn't like it very much.
What does it say? There have been a lot of changes. Then you wrote Xu Fu as a good guy, which makes me speechless. Is the little Japanese ancestor still a good person? And you wrote Ying Zheng as a bad guy. Can you only say that there is a flaw in your brain? Don't change it blindly.
It's like a mental illness! Not even the most basic qualities. There is no such thing as tutoring!
Low quality, unmatched morality
300 Years of heavenly beings, earthly gods and fairyland, you have a 3-month and half-step golden elixir. How should I put it? How about respecting 300 years? Is the world level high? Even if you become an immortal, you can't do it like this, right?
It's going to be on the shelves soon, but it's not arranged yet.
If you're like this, writing realistic plots is actually poisonous.
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