Marvel: Playing Swain, I Ascend as a Demon from the Start

I'm just here to enjoy myself. The logic is poor, not fun, and the plot is messy. I just write whatever comes to my mind. Let's write a new book. Don't take such big steps as soon as you start and cram everything into it.

The Dragon King has been pulled from the leader to one of the races

I have always been looking forward to writing a novel in which I play a lol hero, but at least I have to look up information to find out the hero's background story, instead of just starting to write after knowing his qw. . . The demon in Swain's body is the secret demon Ram, one of the six demons subordinate to the fearful Fiddlesticks among the ten demons. By the way, the nightmare demon Nocturne is also among these six.

There are so many problems with this book! 1: This is a hodgepodge novel. The mutants that appear in the book make me feel that this novel will not go far. 2: The layout is confusing. I don't know if it's my fault or the author's fault. When I read it on my mobile phone, there were almost no periods in the novel, which made the viewing experience very poor. If anyone knows me, you can tell me. Three: A cool question. In the beginning, when the protagonist appears as a crow, the author wrote it a little too high and low, but the exit was too hasty. In fact, it could have been left in suspense. For example, the protagonist leaves a sentence full of connotation, and then writes that the characters in the plot think wildly after knowing what the protagonist said. In fact, there are still some questions that I am too lazy to answer, and this only represents my personal opinions and suggestions. I like this type of genre and want the author to write about it before I write a review. If any reader has a different opinion than me, please discuss it rationally and don't use swear words.

The content is a mess, one is invaded by one, and another is invaded by that. I don't know what you want to write about, and the protagonist is also very aggrieved.

Let's first clarify the Alliance Universe before talking about it.

The copy can be stretched instantly and can be cut.

Uh, are you using this book to make yourself happy? Have you considered the readers' feelings?

Just play Pei Jiao directly, there are inherent similarities between them with the same name. That's Saint Fuxi

All the content that can be written in detail is written at once. You can finish the plot of resurrecting Ying Zheng in one chapter. It is boring to watch.