Navy from the Start, Aiming to Become a Pokémon Master

It looked good at first, but when you wrote about forgetting skills, a Pokémon can only learn four skills, so I lost interest in reading it. A real-world skill can be forgotten, and it's not like the number of skill columns in the game is limited.

How mean are you to still have Garp's favorability after being beaten like this?

It's so poisonous. Whether it's intentional or not, Garp almost beat the protagonist to death, and yet his favorability level is at full level. How cheap is this guy?

There is no need to limit a few skills, just like playing games.

I think grandpa's writing is really poisonous. Even if Garp took the initiative, many people wouldn't buy it. What's more, it's the protagonist who takes the initiative. Change it

The storyline is very good, but the writing style needs to be improved. Overall, this article is okay.

Have a system and still be a navy?

Can imitation skills imitate elementalization?

Other Pokémon can interact with each other personally, but can this one interact with others? It's weird.

Occupying the front row, I feel like this is going to be popular hahahaha