Making Up a Diary in Konoha, I Leave the Entire Ninja World Stunned

Or is it a reflection of the author himself? You all know your end, but in order to test whether Danzo the Third can kill you, you still reveal all your abilities? It's really a test with your own life. In more than ten years of reading, I have never seen such a vicious plot

It was too stupid to write Shisui, risking his own life to test the third generation and Danzo, and the protagonist would have died long ago. In the later period, there were more diary holders than Shinai, and the protagonist revealed that Cao was a thief, and he was no longer interested in reading anymore. Minato Shinai and his wife were so good, did they have to be separated in order to write a good plot? Not to mention this is not a plus point. Just talking about the post-processing of Sina's emotional problems and the issue of Minato being cheated, plus the issue of whether Naruto should call the protagonist stepfather, etc., It is annoying to watch, and a good passionate drama has become an ethics drama. Is there no decent single woman in Konoha? Aren't Yuhi Kurenai, Tsunade, Hinata, Tenten, and Ino enough? If there are not enough people from other villages, if the author includes some dead people and married women, the core of the book will change sooner or later. A harem is almost enough. The core of your book is the main plot. Fishing out a dead wife to engage in Cao Cao's thieves can only mean that the road is narrow.

I wrote this for my own enjoyment, so it's nothing. Even if Shisui had a brain, he was written as brainless by the author. To put it bluntly, the author wanted the protagonist to get Shisui's kaleidoscope.

High emotional intelligence: I really don't want to skip it Low EQ: I am water A Shisui: Dead Water Chapter 7, you are an author who can write novels

In the story made up by the protagonist, why does Naruto like Hinata? In the original story, Naruto has only regarded Hinata as an ordinary friend since he was a child. It was not until the time when he was carrying rice that he realized that Hinata liked him because of Hinata's sacrifice, and then began to care about Hinata. It's impossible for Hinata to still stand up to protect Naruto in the protagonist's story, right?

I don't understand the characters thoroughly, and the writing is poor. The diary I wrote looks so awkward that I can write two rooms and one living room.

Just like the title, the things that can be solved in two or three chapters are lost in seven or eight chapters. I am speechless.

100 Chakra for 12 years, 50 chakra for two days, right? 666

Why don't you write it again? The subject matter is quite good.

How can I write a book if I don't even understand the characters' timeline? Mentally retarded author