Great Qin: I, Jade Tiger, Take Another Concubine, and the First Emperor Panics

The author is really **not good at changing anyone, you become that ugly tiger

Jade Tiger is just a fat guy. If you lose weight, it doesn't matter. You have to describe how you look. I was also convinced. In that era, human life was not as good as death. It doesn't matter whether he looks handsome or not. No sense of immersion at all,**

As a result, the author had to take it apart and couldn't divide it into segments, making the experience extremely poor. And Yan Lingji is in a cave, brother. There is a plot where she can see Xinzheng City.

Night Crow? Isn't it Mo Crow? You, the author, accidentally typed the word wrong.

Yan Lingji's authentic female anchor's spoken language, thanks to my brother Hu

If it weren't for the fact that the female characters are the type that most of Feilu's readers are, this book would be really bad. There are many places where the logic doesn't make sense. The male protagonist is described as resourceful, but in the end, he still sees women unable to walk. However, the quality of Feilu is actually normal.

You are really good at it. You can write a lot of commentary and analysis, which takes up more than half of the plot. He~tiu

Author, you've gone too far. The title of Chapter 25 is "Opening the Blind Box", and the protagonist actually opened a whole chapter. Moreover, a hormone fruit was mixed in. Will it be added to the system of Dead Fire Sea next? If you want to join, I suggest you have Naruto's Sharingan or Rinnegan and the Earth Reincarnation. After all, the abilities of these lenses are pretty good, especially Susanoo. By the way, if the protagonist can really use Susanoo in the later stage, can it be set as our ancient armor, preferably black with dragon patterns. How can our protagonist wear the Tengo armor from his childhood? If you are a pirate, Kaido's Fish Fruit is a must. The God of Death, Aizen Kyoka Suigetsu and the form fused with Honyu. Although the Honyu form is a bit ugly, there is nothing to say about its power, especially his ultimate move of Five Dragons Reincarnation, which is really handsome, and he is also full of charisma when he speaks. Of course, this is my suggestion, and the author may or may not use it.

Can the beauty from the Yin Yang family come on stage soon? The protagonists are beauties such as Xinzheng Zi Nu Nong Yuyan Lingji, and it is only a matter of time before they are admitted to the harem. However, the Yin and Yang family in the An timeline have defected to Qin, and it is more difficult to deal with all the beauties in Xianyang. I suggest this be possible, because the arrival of the protagonist changed the secret of heaven, so Donghuang Taiyi sent Yan Fei Yueshen and other beauties to investigate the protagonist, so that the protagonist could take the opportunity to capture them, and the Yin and Yang family originally believed in divination, so the plot would be more reasonable. The author, Concubine Yan, must accept it. Although the original film only appeared for a short time, everyone who read it at the time knew that she was willing to do anything for her husband, no matter whether it was right or wrong, and she was a good wife and loving mother. If the protagonist let such a good woman go, it would be really bad for her.

The writing is good, but the appearance of the protagonist can be confused in people's minds with the help of the system. If the protagonist's incredible appearance is transplanted, can't he also transplant his new name? Emerald Tiger doesn't look like the same name. Of course, the author will not let go of any of the beauties in the original work Tianxing Qinshi.