Red Mansion: Second Master Lian of Jia Mansion, the Martial Saint of Zhenguo

Having no choice but to make arrangements? Time conflict? When writing a book in FL, you only need a rough idea of ​​the time, the right direction, and "patching" the details and it will be over. After all, you are the author, and the readers are just reading the book. You don't need to modify your outline because of what the readers say, but you also need to know what is poisonous and what is cool in FL. You come to Feilu just to read cool articles. If what you write doesn't make readers happy, why should you ask readers to subscribe to you? It was a poisonous point that the princess sent Xue Pan. It was also a poisonous point that Qin Keqing still married Jia Rong after traveling so early. Maybe you would find an opportunity to accept Qin Keqing later, but it was too late and she had already consummated the marriage with Jia Rong. Accepting Qin Keqing at this time is another wave of poison to the readers who chased here. Slowly** Does anyone still read your book? Readers have eaten a wave of poisonous points, and if they are unhappy, they will naturally vent their anger in the comment area. Just as a suggestion from a reader, if you can change it, change it as soon as possible. Princess Bulun is still Qin Keqing. If you can't change it, just go into hiding, or simply be cruel. Both of them died "early" in an accident. Otherwise, these two words will always be "active" in your book, which will only make readers feel uncomfortable.

If you want to cheat, it's better to go directly to the system. You are a martial arts master in your previous life. Did you come from under one person or from a martial arts novel? Real-life martial arts are not so powerful, and you are really angry...

What's wrong with this?

The author quickly sped up the time schedule, and the plot didn't even begin, so there was nothing interesting to watch. I hope you don't become a nanny. In many Red Mansions novels, the protagonist works hard outside, but when he comes back, he shrinks back and is suppressed. If Jia's mother and the second wife are obsessed with death, just leave them alone and cut them off as soon as possible. Don't become the second wife's nanny out of filial piety.

Regarding Ma Shanghuahua's book "The Red Mansion: The Second Master Lian of Jia Mansion, the Martial Saint of Zhenguo" [10], the inheritance is orderly, and the retainer A Biao (please collect flowers and collect it) comments on the chapters.

Commentary on the chapters of "The Red Mansion: The Second Master Lian of Jia Mansion, the Martial Saint of Zhenguo" written by Ma Shanghuahua [30] Tune the tiger away from the mountain, Tongzhou banditry.