Dream of the Red Chamber: Jia Lian, the Martial Saint Who Guards the Nation

The princess gave Xue Pan this piece of shit??? Why not give Wang Xifeng and Lin Daiyu together?

Mother Jia is not very smart, but the rumors have come out that she can only make mistakes and there is no better way. Later, I believed it. Some people said that she was deliberately raised to waste. I think it is nonsense. Look at the original Jia Baoyu's treatment of a white body and the son of a fifth-grade official. The slaves and maids add up to hundreds of servants. Even the princes do not have such treatment, let alone the one who dropped the jade. The treatment of Lian, the heir to the Rongguo Mansion, was a hundred times different. Besides, the slaves she managed in the Rongguo Mansion were either slaves or masters. She called the maid sister to call the slave grandpa, asked the servants to do things for money, and even used her connections with the Rongguo Mansion to make the slave's grandson an official. Then she even took the masters of the Rongguo Mansion to attend the banquet. She had completely embarrassed the Rongguo Mansion. She knew clearly that the Lai family was greedy for the Mo Mansion's countless money, but there was nothing she could do about the slaves.

The princess was given to Xue Pan, so Qin Keqing still married Jia Rong? Can't the plot be changed when the protagonist arrives so early?

This operation in Feilu is a precursor to eunuchs.

Many protagonists in Red Mansion novels are not Jia Baoyu, so they are tricked by the second room and the direct descendant. It is normal to be tricked. I don't expect to avoid being tricked at this kind of start. However, when I can't get over Jia Mu, I always write that the protagonist is awesome outside and is tricked at home. How can I continue to watch it if I can't calm down. This book is a bit better. The main character, ** Wu, has a decent status in Jia Mu's heart, but it's just passable. It's better to write less about the protagonist who puts out fires and wipes the butt. He can either break up the family or poison Jia Mu to death. He can become the head of the house and take care of the second wife. That's enough.

The princess has already written it out and wants to give it to Xue Pan. The protagonist probably won't be able to accept it. It is recommended that she arrange her disappearance and death immediately and don't write anything to Xue Pan.

Personally, I feel that the setting of calamity is a bit unnecessary and has no other use. If it is specifically used to break through the realm, it is not as good as having past life experience and unparalleled understanding as the introduction says. What's more, the protagonist specifically asked Jia She what the meaning of "Jie Luck" was, and the key point was that Jia She actually gave an explanation. Well, how can I put it? It feels like the golden finger is very crotch-stretching, and it's not the only one. To be honest, writing about The Red Mansion and setting up the realm of martial arts is actually inconsistent. It would be better to directly set the protagonist as the only one who knows martial arts. Most of the other backgrounds have some gods and ghosts, but overall it is still a normal world. This kind of setting that is similar to the one-on-one approach is more interesting. Also, according to the author's setting, the protagonist was a martial arts master in his previous life, or a martial arts master with a background in the End of the Law, but currently, he does not show any specific advantages, such as unique skills, combat ability, experience, etc. Even breakthroughs in realms are mostly achieved through luck, and there are also subsequent so-called master tribulations. Is it possible that things like state of mind were present in the past life but are gone in this life? Do you want to cross over again? The settings are a bit confusing. Finally, the character of the protagonist is also a little strange and subtle. He was a master figure in his previous life, but he always feels a little immature in terms of his character. Many things are not handled properly, such as the servants who spoke earlier, who were fooled in Jinling, and many things that require Jia She to understand. . . Basically, the only way to deal with it is to use force to overwhelm others. In the front, he is unwilling to reveal his strength and tries hard to hide his clumsiness, but later, he inexplicably shows his strength without any scruples, making people guess the situation, which is a bit inconsistent. The most important thing is that for now, there is no big climax or exciting point. . . Of course, overall, the writing is good and I can read it. I just hope that it doesn't fall into some kind of weird circle after the writing. For example, the protagonist is very awesome outside and has been granted a title, but when he returns to the palace, he has to look at people's faces and be ridiculed. This kind of inexplicable and illogical plot.

Having no choice but to make arrangements? Time conflict? When writing a book in FL, you only need a rough idea of ​​the time, the right direction, and "patching" the details and it will be over. After all, you are the author, and the readers are just reading the book. You don't need to modify your outline because of what the readers say, but you also need to know what is poisonous and what is cool in FL. You come to Feilu just to read cool articles. If what you write doesn't make readers happy, why should you ask readers to subscribe to you? It was a poisonous point that the princess sent Xue Pan. It was also a poisonous point that Qin Keqing still married Jia Rong after traveling so early. Maybe you would find an opportunity to accept Qin Keqing later, but it was too late and she had already consummated the marriage with Jia Rong. Accepting Qin Keqing at this time is another wave of poison to the readers who chased here. Slowly** Does anyone still read your book? Readers have eaten a wave of poisonous points, and if they are unhappy, they will naturally vent their anger in the comment area. Just as a suggestion from a reader, if you can change it, change it as soon as possible. Princess Bulun is still Qin Keqing. If you can't change it, just go into hiding, or simply be cruel. Both of them died "early" in an accident. Otherwise, these two words will always be "active" in your book, which will only make readers feel uncomfortable.

Feilu is an old feature. It is poisonous as soon as it starts charging. The 69th picture made me wonder if dozens of pictures were missed. It was all laid out before, but you got over it all at once. **.

I saw some love plot between Xue Pan and the princess and it was instantly retracted.