
One-Punch Man: Saitama Is Exposed, and Tornado Is Still Acting Tsundere!
一拳:曝光琦玉,龙卷还在傲娇!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 781k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
240Chapters
3.8MReads
18.2kFlowers
9.8Score
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Satan in Dragon Ball knows who he is taking credit from. Although he has not admitted it publicly, he has helped wherever he can. One punch makes a difference. I really like this kind of subject. It is best for comic fans to angrily attack the top brass of the Hero Association.
There is no protagonist and no sense of immersion.
I feel like you'd better not put it on the shelves. It's 100% on the street. It's a bunch of bad stuff at the back. The writing is not that good. The front looks okay, but the back is getting more and more speechless.
Mosquito Girl was not shot to death by Teacher Saitama at all, but was shot away directly. Although the large pool of blood was very scary, in the comics she even opened an octopus dumpling shop with Steel Gorilla.
Haha... I was stepped on by many people, but it doesn't matter, I just want to give the teacher a thumbs up here. Moreover, judging from the character design of the teacher in the original version, it is impossible for his character to have a harem... I like the single heroine... Also, unless the teacher is taken away by a time traveler, otherwise, it is impossible for him to have a harem or something. What's more, they are still sisters... I also hate Fubuki. This is mainly reflected in the second part. At that time, Fubuki wanted to kill the teacher with a knife, and the reason for all this was to win over the other party. If he fails to win back, he just wants his subordinates to beat up Saitama. What qualifications does this kind of mentality have to win the teacher's approval? And in the middle period, he was completely thinking about recruiting Saitama to join his organization, and wanted to unite outsiders to deal with his sister... An adult who was broken as a child is still engaging in cliques and calling himself a hero? Although her sister is a little overprotective of herself, this is not an excuse for her to unite outsiders against her sister. She had never thought about what she would do if the outsider who helped her was far more powerful than her sister and wanted to kill him? Second point, the reason why Fubuki always wanted to please Saitama in the later stage was just because of the opponent's strength. If Saitama has no strength, what will be the consequences in the second part? Have you ever thought about it? The third point is that the Weird Association seems to be just an evil organization that wants to rule the world, but in fact? If it weren't for Fubuki's disapproval of Sikes' actions in high school. The Weird Association will no longer appear now, and Tatsumaki himself is a man who dotes on his sister. After the conflict between the two, Sykes was sealed by Fubuki and became a useless person. Last but not least, even if Fubuki gradually gets better in the later period, you still need to have the ability to be on par with her before she can talk to you easily. Looking back at Tatsumaki, she is indeed a person with some problems, but her style of doing things is different from her sister. She was always the one at the front, and never bothered to take the initiative to deal with the weak. Although she was selfish and arrogant, she did have the arrogance before big guys like Blast and Saitama showed up. But instead of using this power to rule the world, she used this power to help those who were weak. Fubuki couldn't compare to this. She has a high tolerance for her younger sister, but in terms of personality, someone still needs to enlighten her. The original version of Tatsumaki doesn't have much character design, it only shows her indifference and dominance, but the remake version of Tatsumaki is still quite popular hehe.
Indeed... To be honest, I just said before that Tatsumaki and Saitama-sensei would have a cp, but just writing a few memory fragments is enough. There is no need to insert the later plot of Tatsumaki when writing the exciting plot... Especially the Weird Association later on. It's not too late to write about these later, but writing it like this feels a bit confusing. Alas, why don't the author change it? Deleted the Weird Association here? Modify it slightly and continue to link the plot of King of the Deep? Although I have not written here in Feilu, I should be able to delete chapters, right? It should be possible to modify it.
I have no idea what you are writing about
It completes the refreshing feeling of never revealing the protagonist's identity in the original work. Quick update, change the cover.
Come on, come on, come on! This is the first time I saw a novel written entirely about Mr. Saitama in Feilu! Collect this book! By the way, remember to put away the tornado hehe~ Forget about blowing snow, if you don't like it╮_╭ When the tornado is contained, I will immediately reward you with fifty yuan...
How long do you want to drink a memory fragment? Planning to let go