Tomb Raiding: Playing Zhang Qiling, I Slay the Xiangxi Corpse King in Fury

The original novel didn't even dare to write this. It's so heavy that even though I can pick it up, I can't use it in combat. It weighs 150 pounds and weighs as much as the sky.

The writing is so bad, some of it is just nonsense. The black gold ancient sword weighs a thousand pounds, and the hair mound is 18cm long, which is outrageous.

It is not the Holy Mother who saves people. This is the kind of person the little brother is. He will definitely save people if he can. It is necessary to play him and save people.

It's probably the worst book I've ever read about someone who plays the role of a little brother. The murderous bear walked over slowly, caught the bear's punch, and then stabbed him to death. I was drunk. Are you sure you are playing the little brother? What would the younger brother do? Instead of walking over, he directly rushed over and kicked the bear with a knee. He didn't even use a knife. He twisted his neck behind him and delivered a fatal blow. This is what the guy would look like. Look at what you're describing. You don't know how to write action scenes. Don't write about a guy. It really made me angry.

The author said that Yang Re and Yang Re have not touched a man for a long time, which means they are no longer virgins, so they shouldn't accept her as the heroine, right?

How could a country have such disregard for human life?

The update speed is not enough

These women don't know how much they weigh, and they are always arrogant, kissing and hugging the male protagonist at any time. If it were Brother Zhang Qiling, would he allow these people to be like this? The male protagonist behaves like a sultry dick

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