The Uncanny Counter: From the Start, Reviewing the New Uncanny Marshal
不良人：开局盘点新任不良帅。
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 22k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
15Chapters
1.4MReads
3.3kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 12
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I want to see bad people today. Can I update it tomorrow? As for the novel, I reconceived it again. Everyone saw that Li Siyuan wanted to destroy Taiyuan, so Li Siyuan definitely couldn't stay in the Jin Kingdom, and the light curtain exposed that he killed bad people, so he couldn't take refuge with bad people. But I don't want to write him off too soon. So I planned to write that Li Siyuan followed Zhu Wen and worshiped him as his adoptive father. Still thinking about the details. Readers can also give more comments and opinions.
This part is very painful to watch.
What the hell are you writing about?
I just want to know if Yuan Tiangang will go directly to destroy the planetarium if he knows that Li Siyuan killed Li Xingyun!
Hurry up and update it, it's too little and not enough to read.
It's divided into sections and has punctuation. The content is okay, but your height makes it comfortable to watch.
Just divide it into sections.
Let's just forget that the segmentation is a bit messy, mainly because too much content has been deleted. Although everyone who has read it knows what happened, at least the main content should be reflected and you can at least increase the number of words. Some small things can be deleted, but once they are written, write the entire paragraph instead of just two or three sentences that cover the entire episode.
Yes, yes, but without punctuating a paragraph, it's a lot of stuff and a bit tiring.
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