Changyue: I Am Tantai Jin, My Maid Li Susu

Is it the male protagonist with a bamboo pole and a long face? Can you write this?

If I were to write this protagonist, this scene would definitely go on a killing spree. At worst, I could just imitate the ancient Bai Qi, killing 10,000 enemies and losing 8,000 to myself. How else could I kill a god? Anyway, there is a system to take care of it. It's just one less treasure box, and this one is not missing. Maybe it can also cause a climax. The protagonist Chunchun is sick. This is already the case. Why do you want to push Pianran to the outside? Furthermore, won't Ye Qingyu rebel against the protagonist because of Pianran in the future? Where did the author get his ideas? What if the author loses his mind and writes about Pianran and Ye Qingyu rebelling against the protagonist in the future? You can't do it obviously, so you can do it covertly. No one can suspect the protagonist. Anyway, in the world view of the novel, use Ye Qingyu to guide the plot, wait for the protagonist to become the emperor, and then execute him, and then use the system to summon an ancient general. The plot remains unchanged. Maybe there is no need to wait for the protagonist to become the emperor and use the system to fill in the pit. The plot will not be messed up, and Pianran can finish it in advance! It's a pity that the author didn't listen to his opinions.

I won't go into too much detail. This protagonist is a coward. He is ranked at the top of the list of lickers. He licks a heroine with an abnormal brain circuit. I am really confused. I lick the heroine in one novel and still lick the heroine in two novels. Is it based on the plot? The male protagonist of the plot is not like this either! There are thousands of system names, but this system simply cannot reflect the decisiveness of killing.

这个作者一直把太阳圣地写成太衍圣地，唉，很烦。

It's all on the shelves, there are so many chapters, and a woman confiscated it. Let's not talk about it. The author must have been a good manager in ancient times. I admire it! Moreover, after writing so many chapters of the plot, the protagonist is still playing in the Sheng Kingdom. When the protagonist becomes the emperor, it will be far away. It is so slow to follow the general plot and details!

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