Anime Crossover: Gaining Zhongli's Poise from the Start

It can be seen that the author deliberately avoids problems such as the villain's mental retardation. The author's writing is very successful, and the protagonist feels suppressed... The protagonist with Goldfinger won the game, which just gave me a feeling of being evenly matched. As a result, the whole book was too bland and even depressing. I couldn't help but wonder whether the protagonist was too useless, or Goldfinger was too weak... The pretentious plot was also too stiff.

The writing style is jerky and the pretentiousness is too stiff, not good.

The character description is too blunt, such as Kasumigaoka Shiu. I don't know if the author has read the anime or the original work. Although Kasumigaoka Shiu has a vicious tongue, it is poisonous to people who are very familiar and have a good relationship, and the poisonous tongue is also measured. He will not be vicious without limit, nor will he be vicious to a stranger or someone with whom he is not familiar. This is not uneducated or low-quality.

It's such an awkward book. It has no temperament or emotional intelligence. You might as well write about a bald devil. If a woman hadn't been given free money to write the book, the ghost would only want you to read it. It's a book that will be over once it's put on the shelf.

The pretense is too blunt. For example, when the protagonist and Hirata are playing Go, they simply crush him to death, or the protagonist deliberately kills him in an inextricable way so that he can have more trouble with the heroine Yan Sheng? After getting Jiang Liuer's chess skills, why is it incomplete? The protagonist is Xiaobai, but he still learns how to counterattack in desperate situations in anime.

The pretense is really hard to write, and all the cool news is ruined by this blind pretense.

Also, it's uncomfortable for people watching this section.

The crowned heroic spirits and the King's Treasure House Chengli Sword can basically belong to the top combat power. The treasure house has countless treasures and a simple cultivator is no better than a mess like you.

When I searched for this anime character, I received the Fire Thunder Sword?●ω●?

I understand, some people appear to be quite stable, but they turn out to be funny, right?