Lord of the Hufflepuffs at Hogwarts

Guan Yuan is a little transparent in all the series, but if you look deeper, you will find that although Guan Yuan does not have any big figures who are the pillars of the top ten, and there are no people from Guan Yuan, but Guan Yuan has the largest number of people and is the most united. The most important thing is that in the entire wizarding world, the middle to middle and high-level people are all from Guan Yuan. No matter what you do, you can't do without Guan Yuan. Let's take the simplest example. In the national army, Guan Yuan has never produced a military commander. However, from the company commander to the brigade commander, all the people from Guan Yuan are from Guan Yuan. They say they are awesome but they are very united.

I feel like ancient magic is quite powerful.

The current setting is too weird. The original words used in the article are known to be that Solis was born two years before Harry, Solis received the admission notice seven years later when Solis was 3 years old, Solis is the first class of Harry, Ginny has two years left to enter, the Iron Hat King has two years to go, Solis and the twins entered school in the same year, Penelo is the first Solis, and there are others that I didn't remember at the moment... Or maybe I remembered it wrong? I'm really messed up... Brother, it's a good thing for us to create something new. Please be careful and don't be inconsistent.. I think I like the style in Haven, but I'm a little confused.

I have read at least fifty HP books, not to mention hundreds, and a lot of them are interesting in the first ten or so chapters, but the rest are basically the plot of Shui's original work. There are very few original works of my own, so it is better to read the original work. There are also a small number of innovations, but the logic and characters are not good at all. It looks like a Western fantasy world written in HP fan fiction. A very few of them start high and go low, and the more you look at them, the less interesting they become. I hope the author can maintain this state and continue to write better.

Harry Potter has relatively good results. Many of them will make Ron black and then stamp on him like crazy. It's not easy for you to do this, but you can write about Percy being black and creating conflict is still interesting. It cannot be too stable all the time, otherwise there will be no ups and downs. For example, the Wazai book was cut because it was too boring and no one read it.

HP's new book, please collect and support it first, then review the content after reading it

Brother, can you please add some punctuation marks? It's really uncomfortable to watch.

Your layout is really uncomfortable to read. Add some punctuation.

The layout is really uncomfortable, but it's better to just listen to it. I just started watching it and asked who the heroine is? Can anyone tell me, thank you!

Commentary on Chapter 6 of "The Lord of the Badger Yard at Hogwarts" written by The Shield of Avalon. The little witch appears and encounters Penello.