Elf: Xiaozhi's Trump Card Exposed, Shocking the World

Are you expecting the heroine to get sick and die?

Not many of Ah Sheng's novels are about lolita. Who would read it if you do this here?

A lot of people's designs are so broken??

It is the first time for an author to write about Pokémon, so don't put too much pressure on the author. As readers, we can give the author some suggestions and support. How to write it specifically? It also depends on the author. At the same time, it would be better if the author does not give up.

Like the title says, Xiaozhi is the yyds. Don't worry about your crimson, green, and others. Can the combined popularity of ten crimson, green, and green ones be as popular as one of Xiaozhi's hands? Also, the characters in your book are all broken. Can you write it well?

You should change your thinking when writing. I keep mumbling and mumbling and I'm tired of reading it.

说实话，还真是有点问题，很多细节都没描述，比如怎么得到SSS的评价就没说清楚，而且思诺的人物设定也都没塑造成功，思诺应该是因为小时候养父对她的觊觎，所以导致她厌恶那些对自己孩子有觊觎的父亲，所以原著就帮她的同学丹解决她的父亲还有自己的养父，而且主角给我一种有点疯狂又没点底限的感觉，又不是快没命了要争分夺秒变强什么的，总有一种莫名其妙的感觉。

If you haven't read the comic, are you delaying reading it?

Alas, I don't know how to evaluate it after reading it. Divine power, god, author, do you have any misunderstandings about these two words? You say you are a god, how can you still be subdued? Your gods can be subdued, awesome. You told me that the Pokémon's move is Power 666. I don't know the name of the move. Can you check it out? A mythical beast is a mythical beast, and its moves are just its moves. If you don't know it by looking at it, it will ruin your childhood.

I don't know if the author is Yun or something else. There are many things wrong. Where did the Gyarados come from? When the Lizard King beat Darkrai, it was a one-on-one fight and the black hole only had abnormal status and no damage. Xiaozhi's gold content was stunned and he said that you had cut it. Are you sure it's not a sunspot? When Charizard fought Frozen Bird, you said Charizard could die directly if it was underdeveloped, Charizard Valley. Have you compared it? There are a bunch of private settings, forget the private settings. The key is that I felt quite unhappy about it. I don't know if the author is deliberately looking for a gimmick or what he wants to do? I just want to say that it was fine before it was put on the shelves. But if it is still like this after it is put on the shelves, readers will be easy to bully.

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I think Aka is so powerful as a vampire.

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Broken chapter, where did you learn it?

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