I'm a Dark Star, and I Had a Bad Handsome Heart at the Beginning.

The writing is not as domineering as Li Xingyun's original work. This is the first time I have seen such a **** author.

Why would you hide your identity from a woman? How could they sell you? Why does the protagonist feel that his wife is not as loyal as his subordinates?

Hurry and kill Zhang Zifan. If you see him, you will kill him.

You shouldn't write about bad people. Or don't start writing from the sixth season. Li Xingyun and Zhang Zifan are the only confidants and brothers. Although no one wrote about brotherhood in Feilu. Then you can't just turn your brother into a life-or-death enemy for no reason, right? Yes! In front of Zhang Zifan, Li Xingyun looked too ordinary and not worth mentioning. He even slept with his junior sister! I am the protagonist and I hate Zhang Zifan too! Then you should cut off your beard in advance! I started writing it from the first season, before the two of them knew each other. Zhang Zifan's original purpose was to help Li Siyuan capture Li Xingyun. At that time, the two sides were enemies but not friends. It would be nothing if you killed Zhang Zifan at that time. Shangguan Yunque was resurrected earlier, and I think you have some conscience. A bit emotional. As a result, later on, the protagonist group has obviously experienced so many lives and deaths, and both parties can trust their lives, but you suddenly want to kill the other party? Are you backstabbing your brother, or are you Ren? You can either simply write that Zhang Zifan went to Mobei from the beginning and was killed directly. However, we must not be killed by Li Xingyun! If Li Xingyun can kill Zhang Zifan, can he be Li Xingyun? If your father kills you, can he be your father? I'm writing a fanfic but completely abandoning the animated characters. What do you think?

严谨一点啊，第一张俩路人吃烤串去看电影，没一会儿就高速路上吃烤串了，这是开车去隔壁市看电影还是一把烤串吃了两个多小时。。。

Is it better to write about bad people? I'm so dissatisfied.

Even if you can't fully exert your internal strength due to the sudden increase in your internal strength, your skills as a big star are incredible. When Li Xingyun first appeared in the first season, he had the skills of a small star.

I haven't read the latest one yet, because I just heard that it has a single female protagonist, and I thought King Qi was out of the question, so I stopped watching it. However, I have seen some of the clips, and I would like to ask if there are any differences in the development between the novel and the original work.

Don't you accept beauties who don't stop at the cup?

I thought it would be a mixed martial arts world

It's boring. I'm bored after reading more than 40 chapters.

Regarding Han Cube's book "I have become an immortal, do you think this is the collapse of the world?" Chapter 25 Visible Goals Chapter Commentary.