Ninth Prince of the Dream of the Red Chamber: Take Jia Yuanchun as a Consort from the Start

It can only be said that your heart is as high as the sky. If you don't have the writing power, you can either cheat the protagonist honestly, or change the setting and turn Red Mansions into an ordinary materialistic world. Nowadays, many authors hate cheating the protagonist. It seems that novels written with cheating become more enjoyable, but the fact is that cheating is greatly reduced. It makes up for the problem of the author's writing skills, allowing novice authors to write popular books. As long as they are good enough, there will always be people who buy them. On the contrary, authors who do not cheat and do not have enough writing skills can only write plots that reduce intelligence. Otherwise, the novel will simply collapse and cannot be continued. Why bother? Can't everything be solved by just opening a cheat?

There are too many plots that are unreasonable, and a little trick is better than your embarrassing Machiavellian tactics. As far as Baoyu's character is concerned, he would never dare to act recklessly where Jia Zheng is. No matter how useless a rich man is, he is nothing like sand. He can offend whomever he cannot afford to offend.

I am just discussing, is it possible for a prince to marry a concubine and become a princess?

Author, you didn't want to write it as soon as it was published. The author has no system. What kind of history of ghosts and gods are you writing? You must know that if you want to open it according to the original setting of gods, then the fate of the Twelve Golden Hairpins is doomed. The comments are clearly written. It was well written before it was published. , The result was a big poison for readers as soon as it was released. I was really convinced. If you have a system and can cultivate immortality, then you can deal with those fairies, but the protagonist does not. If the fairy sees that the girls do not follow the instructions and directly intervenes, what will the protagonist do?

This is too smart. Who is she? She dares to attack relatives of the emperor, and this is the end?

By the way, the protagonist has no golden finger, no mother clan power behind him, and he is pushed to the forefront of the limelight. How can he develop? Do you really think that an ordinary person can fight against a bunch of old foxes? Not to mention that Red Mansion has a fairy background and extraordinary monks

Traveling through the ancient royal family, those who didn't want to be emperors were all sick, especially those who just wanted to be the "idle king", it wasn't as simple as being sick.

If witchcraft really had such a great effect, how could Ma Daopo be so stupid? Isn't it **** readers who deal with these gods and ghosts? There are gods and ghosts in the background of the original book, but if you really write it like this, the main character, the time traveler, has been destroyed by humanity long ago. If there is no system, then don't deal with these things. It will make people uncomfortable.

That military system is pure nonsense! Let me tell the author something: changes in the military system in the past dynasties are closely related to the advancement of military weapons! The current systems such as squads, platoons, companies, and battalions are all based on the degree of weapon automation! In the era of queuing to shoot, there was no squad level, only platoons and square formations firing volleys! During World War I, as weapons advanced to the semi-automatic era, the squad system appeared! I suggest the author to read Qi Jiguang's Art of War! You will know the situation of his system!

Think about it or forget it, too lazy to look at it. After all, I traveled to a world arranged by gods and ghosts, and the protagonist didn't have a golden finger or cultivation level. It was too difficult to break the situation. In the end, I wrote all kinds of forced intellectual stories. I didn't think it was interesting, so I better not read it.