Villain: Heroines, Please Be More Reserved.

First, the protagonist you chose is inappropriate. Xue Pan's identity is destined to miss Baochai. Daichai can be said to be the two most important characters in the Red Mansion. If you are starting like this, you should discard one of them. If you had published this book on another website, it might not be a big deal, but here is Feilu. Missing a girl or giving away a girl are two big problems. So how will you arrange the role of Baochai in the future? No matter how you arrange it, it's not appropriate. If you write about getting married, it's a gift of a daughter; if you don't write about it, it's about missing a daughter; if you write about it, your book may simply disappear. Second, in the context of the Red Mansion, female relatives are not allowed to appear in public, especially the unmarried girls. In your book, Jia Lian takes them directly to Fan Mansion, and even Qin Keqing is there. How did you come up with this plot? The girl from the Jia family doesn't plan to get married, right? Qin Keqing's appearance there was also very outrageous. Is this Mrs. Ningguofu going out with Mr. Lian of Rongguofu?

The real ultimate creature, Pillar Kaz The fake ultimate creature, Ghost Dance Qianwuqian

The summoned character's original world line is so far back, so that's a fool's errand. Basically, everyone has an owner.

Isn't this another version of the abuse of Korean entertainment?

What will happen after the protagonist wins?

I can't accept that the toilet or squatting toilet is conscious and able to speak.

The family competition is very essential. After three competitions, there is no plot anymore. I keep pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.

Gasol for Jefferson in Year 2? Don't you understand NC operation or salary matching? Even if we don't talk about salary matching, Gasol's good performance in the future does not mean that he will play well in the future. If you perform well in the future, you can just trade him over. Have you calculated how much resources and time it will take to trade him over now and train him to the level he will be like in the future? Wouldn't it be more cost-effective to wait for him to play and then trade him? Moreover, players are commodities and belong to the team's assets. The protagonist thinks that he is doing the right thing. In the eyes of others, it is bleeding the boss. In reality, the protagonist will have left long ago. Is there a future?

It is equivalent to saying that only bad students can learn magic. What should you do with good students? This is obviously a novel that teaches bad students

Anyway, I came here to be funny, so come on, I'm quite happy watching it.

At first glance, the writing style is like sand sculpture.

It's no different from those urban slap-in-the-face stories, and you keep complaining that the protagonists don't reveal themselves until the end of the plot, but it turns out that your own writing is not like this. If you have power and subordinates, you won't tell them or take them out. You have to let your subordinates take the initiative to come and slap you in the face.

Use villains to make pornographic licks*

Just watch it and enjoy it. Why do you worry so much about it? If you have the ability, write a book yourself. There is so much bullshit, why don't you stop talking?

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This mentally retarded article made me extremely embarrassed.

After doing it all over again, it's still a licking dog!

The author's previous plot settings are different from the later ones, and some are completely opposite!

This inexplicable stallion story leaves me speechless. The more I read, the less interested I am.

Didn't the previous rewards double? Logically speaking, it's already 100% successful.

Chapter 6: Doesn't it violate the lick* character design if the protagonist wants a divorce? Later, he said that he went on a date against his licking* character. I was really speechless.

I saw Chapter 6. Didn't they come to break off the engagement? Why is it that when the heroine asks to go on a date, it's like licking* and getting together? , The plot behind it probably won't be too good either, I

The most annoying thing about this kind of protagonist who is both important and independent at the same time is that how many people have reached high-level positions with upright views from ancient times to the present? ? Those who have three positive views are all cannon fodder. This kind of protagonist is more independent than those novels. In writing this novel, the standpoint is just different. There is no need to be and stand at the same time.

Expose a meme without any context? I didn't see the coolness of the exposure, so I arrived first

Your realm is a bit stretched. What's the use of setting so many realms? The protagonist would be a quasi-emperor and then grow old?

Is there something wrong with the talent introduction in Chapter 3? It says a thousand times the magic rebound, and then it says a hundred times the rebound.

You don't talk about a miracle doctor, but also a female protagonist? Where did the other heroine go? 216 Photos didn't show up, where did they go? Tell me

Single heroine? ? Or is Ye Yifan's main storyline just one female protagonist? ? There are more than 30 photos, and a female protagonist appears

Will there be any extra updates if you vote monthly?

It feels good, keep writing.