The Myriad Worlds Dungeon Merchant: Want to Run a Dungeon, Dear?

Is there anyone with good writing skills who can take on this kind of subject matter? It makes me uncomfortable to watch, but this subject matter is okay.

Ying Zheng, Xiao Yan, Ye Fan, Xiao Feng and then a Japanese Flame Pillar inserted in the middle, I don't even know what the brain circuit is! Yanzhu's passionate dedication is worthy of recognition, but he is Japanese. It does not mean that he cannot write, but if you want to write, you might as well write more Japanese animation works. Now there is an alien among the four people who are of Yanhuang blood.

I thought it was okay at first, but now I am convinced by what I wrote. I am here to see people from different worlds take risks and clear dungeons, not to see Japanese protagonists. Why do I raise those useless women? Apart from being used by Japanese girls, it's useless. Damn it. Can you please stop writing things that have nothing to do with the plot? I want to watch Japanese girls and read pornographic stories. Isn't it a good idea? What do you think you are doing?

Chun Chun Da**, your protagonist is really just like real nbc, and there is no protagonist, Chun Chun Novice Village Chief

It's like a modern person with the name of a fantasy character. The atmosphere is very poor.

This plot is obviously too urgent. I just said it is unlimited conquest and promotion, and now I have to go straight to the level. Then what is the point of summoning players? What is the use of players who do not even have extraordinary peak combat power? You should rely on this plot to write about the improvement of player strength and the cultivation of human beings. You can also open other modes, such as combat power rankings, guild rankings, and special rewards for the top ones. It can be very exciting, but it will definitely collapse after doing this.

It would be much better if you write less about the protagonist and more about other things.

The Tao-level skills in this book are at the God-King level corresponding to Devouring the Starry Sky, and are actually the Great Emperor-level corresponding to Covering the Sky? I'm not saying that, judging from the expressiveness in the book, the God King is a few levels higher than the Great Emperor, right? The premise of your book that the god king who swallows the stars = the emperor who covers the sky is a bit ridiculous.

Where have all the copies gone? What the hell are you writing now? Why are you doing so many mysterious things? Do you remember clearly how much you wrote? Everyone is mainly here to clear the dungeon. As for what the secrets of the world, fantasy universe, and heavens are all about, we are not interested in them. Don't keep using these random words.

A copy is a copy, it's fun to write If you take too big a step all at once, the heavens will start a war. Then look at D