
Showbiz: Diba Is Stunned as I Take on a Wild Boar Barehanded from the Start
娱乐:开局徒手斗野猪看傻热芭
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 20k Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
9Chapters
1.1MReads
3kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 11
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Those empty water bottles, people have peed in them, and others have done the same thing, and the thought of someone using those bottles to fill water with water makes me wonder. You have to use stones to build a stove. Firstly, it is convenient for cooking, and secondly, it is fireproof. Otherwise, if a sea breeze blows the sparks out and causes a fire, it will not only be a fine, but you will also have to go in. When choosing a campsite, you need to avoid high tides, otherwise there is a high chance that your tent will be flooded. There are many reefs on the coast, and the soles of your feet may be scratched if you are not careful.
Gifting wilderness survival knowledge and experience, sir, couldn't the protagonist be a traveling companion before traveling through time? It also appears that the protagonist is capable. You can't give away a special skill as a gift, such as the ability to control fire. This can earn shock value. If you want to achieve some results, you have to write differently from others and overtake in corners. 90 Days is too long. Readers only come here to read interesting articles, and you are boring if you are just mediocre.
The protagonist can make a hang glider and fly around the island. How awesome is this! It looks very cool!
He is a protected animal. Whether you catch him, beat him or kill him, you are committing a crime.
How much advertising fee does this program need to charge? Anyway, it's a return on investment. There is an article to be made about the two bottles of water that the protagonist changed. What brand are they? Isn't this soft advertising? After that, you have to exchange for condiments, pots and pans, the advertising cost will be at least ** million! .
It's a bad start. You just give a brief introduction on the first card and it's all done in one go. It's a system that's done. In the second picture, I quickly entered the main chapter. I have already written nine chapters, but I haven't gotten to the main theme yet. I don't even know what your writing is like? You are here to earn shock value, not to participate in variety shows. If you stay here for 90 days, there are not only coconuts but also banana trees on the island.
And if you are catching lobsters, can you do this? Use the engineering shovel to dig out the sand, find rocks, use the reef mud to make a stove, find bamboo leaves, fill the stove with bamboo leaves, put the lobster in, light it, seal the stove with sand, and smoke it for half an hour. In this way, a lobster with original flavor is ready, as well as the fragrance of bamboo leaves. No need to add salt, lobster is already salty.
When people are very hungry, will they not care about eating or drinking? Don't care about food appearance. But being hungry for one or two meals does not have that effect, especially if you are not starving, so you will be picky about your first meal on the island. Brush the lobster with coconut oil, and then smoke the lobster with bamboo leaves. The fragrance of the bamboo leaves will permeate the entire lobster. With the addition of coconut oil, the lobster will be very delicious. So the first meal will be very good.
The writing is logical and level, and there is no ink. Without those settings where everything relies on the system, the protagonist seems to be useless. He was a little kid in his former life, but at least he was tall and handsome. If I have to say something wrong, it's coconut. I've never drank coconut water. Nowadays, in big supermarkets and fruit wholesale markets, what kinds of fruits are not available? Not to mention coconuts, there are all kinds of high-end fruits.
For example, Red Crane Fist, its secret, Blood Makeup Mouth. When the time comes, I will practice boxing on the island, and my muscular boxing skills will be full of explosive power and have a masculine beauty. A punch or a kick can break a stone into pieces. It's shocking. Isn't this what it is? If you just punch the air, you won't be able to show that your boxing skills are powerful. What a dick!