
Keeping a Diary in Konoha, Tsunade Can't Sit Still!
人在木叶写日记,纲手坐不住了!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 324k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
97Chapters
3MReads
62.6kFlowers
9.8Score
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?? By the way, why can only Tsunade see the diary? I want to drive a big car, including: Tsunade, Sakura, Ino, Hanabi, Hinata, Hinata Natsu, Yakushi Nonou, Shizune, Anko, Anko, Nohara Rin, Otsutsuki Kaguya, Temari, Konan, Tenten, Terumi Mei, Kurotsuchi. Question mark white, Xiangling, Xigao, Samui, two teak doors, maple, leaf warehouse, Uchiha spring, Inuzuka claw, Inuzuka flower, Menghuang, hydrangea, Ringo rain Yuli. Azabui, Karui, Tayuya, Garura, Kurama Yakumo, Iris, Uzumaki Fuso, Maki, Kazuka Koyuki, Sara, Karin, Senju Mooka, Tsumugi, Chino, Honoka, Nara Yoshino, Matsuri, Dragon Tongue, Maitreya, Summer Star, Camilla, Yukimi, Tsubaki, Earth Spider Hotaru, Yuhuo, Sayo, Ido, Hibiscus, Uryu, Fuuma Saume, Tsunami, Tsubasa Fubuki, Fufu, Shiho, Peacock, Shana, Water Lily, Fuuma Dragonfly, Sparrow Bee, Kyoko, Amon, Hokuto,, Fuugai, Hanoko. Bingyu, Liujia, Tianlang Liuxiang. Guren, Takamine Ryo, Yoshino Kaede, Satoru, Kurama Uroko, Fuuma Kotohime, Hanazhen Princess, Pain Lolido, Uzumaki Mito, Yukino, Mikoto, Uchiha Hari, all the female characters in the movie. There are also all the girls in Infinite Tsukuyomi from Another World, etc. There are some duplicates. Sorry everyone, I only remember these few. Cut off the beard in advance so that other people don't take advantage of them and tease them ambiguously. The clothes are not exposed and are only for the male protagonist to see. Come on.
After writing 20 chapters of a diary, I was rewarded for the first time. It is simply a shame in the diary industry.
If you want this ability, can't you just find a reason to get it from the system? You can't copy it? It's better than pressing a pair of dead eyes, right? You even avoided soul-penetrating poison, why is this acceptable?
And judging from your timeline, isn't the male protagonist 15 years old? Not 12 years old at the beginning? And what about Hongdou and the red student? Where did Quan come from? Moreover, the extermination of the clan started at the age of seven and graduated at the age of twelve. According to your timeline, it does not mean that he entered school at the age of four? So Sasuke went to school for eight years? Three Body Technique??
First, many books have shortcomings, not just this one. When the protagonist gets the golden finger and gets the first ability, he will try it out confidently. I just want to say that you have just gained the ability, why do you think you won't be discovered if you try it. Although it may be difficult for the author to develop the plot if he doesn't try, the chances of being discovered are much lower if he doesn't try than if he tries. It is obviously a golden finger that can survive safely, but it must be gone. And the most important thing is that the protagonist knows to be steady and often reminds himself to be steady, but his actions are all kinds of waves. It has to be poisonous. The problem with the second book is that a golden finger can steadily become stronger if it survives. The protagonist is already twelve years old, why should he go to a ninja school? Isn't it okay if the person to be contacted is outside the school? Does your golden finger need to pick up people by yourself? This is also a problem that many books have, with protagonists who don't know how to use Goldfinger. Very poisonous.
This is a diary stream. It expresses love for the character and the advantages of the plot so that the girl is helped by the hero and then likes him. It is not a crime record stream. If you like the focus and dark stream, I think it is better to be casual. It is not that type. In fact, there are ways to conquer even if you can't communicate. For example, you always say love words. For example, every time Mikoto gives a bento to the hero, he praises and thanks her like crazy, and then records the love words in the diary. , How to guide, for example, I want to help you, save you, what will I do after I save you, give some fantasy to others, the male protagonist is a person in modern life, how can romance come about, this is not about reducing the dimensionality of the Naruto world, giving the wife fantasy to blush and expect secret joy, etc. Mikoto has been written as a resentful woman. The most common wife is because of stimulation and waste. Isn't this a breakthrough?
The writing is good, the style is lighthearted and funny, and it is comfortable to read. It is one of the few that does not deliberately darken conspiracy theories. Nowadays, the fan authors are more cruel than the other. If I mention too many practical things, he slaps me and scolds me for not understanding Naruto. He throws out a lot of in-depth analysis and tells me that this is Naruto, so I should read it carefully and study it seriously. Even more outrageous than those movie critics back then
As the title says, at least Tsunade is like this, why don't we educate her? Don't you need a diary patch? And how do you patch up the ladies and their husbands? Don't you still want to sell underwear? Could this be poisonous? But the ladies are wearing underwear in front of the male protagonist, hey hey hey, when are we going to drive? Madam, I suggest that if you can collect it, the Inuzuka Claws have a kind of wild nature. You can write them in a more beautiful way. It would be good to have a European and American style. Does the author need pictures? The girl appears and uploads pictures. Nara Yoshino is also very good, her appearance is online, Ino Mama is a little old, I won't talk about Choji, Sakura has forgotten, the best ones are Sasuke, Naruto and Hinata, when will Yakumo come, I am also looking forward to the characters in the movie version! Go ahead, as long as you collect them all, I will chase you for ten million words. Be steady, I like your book.
There seems to be something wrong with Mikoto's character, and the protagonist is too horny, right? A harem is basically what all men want, but your male protagonist's character is a bit broken, is he a little too impatient? I feel a bit like a sperm in my brain!
I barely saw the necromancy. Slugs are not independent individuals. There is only one slug in the Moist Bone Forest. Those little slugs are all her clones. Therefore, Tsunade's two attitudes towards slugs and the so-called slug immortal are simply nonsense.