Pokemon: Serena Forever, Conquering Paldea

I can only say that the author, you are just seeking death by writing this in Feilu. There are not so many CP fans in Feilu who like the original work. You are just generating electricity for love and it is of no use (づ●─●)づ

After reading a few chapters, I found a few minor problems. For example, the section to the Grape Academy was not coherent enough, and the word "blood volume" appeared. It's best to change blood volume to physical strength. The Pokémon world is idealistic, so it's best not to use words like blood volume. In addition, there is a problem with the Fengyuan area gorgeous contest champion you mentioned. The gorgeous contest champion only gets a ribbon, which does not have much gold content. After getting a certain number of ribbons, you can be qualified to participate in the gorgeous large-scale celebration. Only the champion of the gorgeous large-scale celebration has a certain gold content. I hope the author can accept my suggestions and write better

Comments on the chapters of "Elves: Eternal Zina, Conquering Padia" written by Wu Shengxuan.

I am really happy to see my favorite Zhina, a fan of Teacher Ag, here. Overall, it has brought a bright light to my bleak middle school life. Even though it was a bit stiff to join Padya and Semei in the team at first, it is not stiff at all. The processing has been done. Very good, the subsequent plot is also very fascinating, and a lot of ag jokes are inserted, which often makes me laugh out loud. The interaction between Zhi Na often makes me smile. I don't want to summarize. I really like this work, but it's a pity that it has been discontinued. I don't blame the author. Zhi Na is eternal, ag is awesome!

Commentary on Chapter 001 The Delivery of the Champion Alchemy Emperor's "Elf: Eternal Zina, Conquering Padia" written by Wu Shengxuan.

This is poisonous, the real world, and it also weakens the characteristics

If nothing else, Zhina Dang thinks it's great

Hungry, Taijing Steel Speaker Cricket Man