I’m Practically Invincible, and You’re Asking Me for a Breakup?
我都快无敌了，你跟我提分手？
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 166k Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
67Chapters
1.5MReads
10.1kFlowers
9.2Score
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The protagonist, Ninth Generation, still has a poor IQ, and even the main plot is hidden when it is ready to be released. No wonder the grades are low.
The author is very ambitious. But with such a long foreshadowing, ** Fei Lu. I didn't feel any better after watching it for a long time. The protagonist has opened a god-level account and entered the novice village, and he is still grinding there. And maybe it's an acquaintance of mine, so he doesn't just save him, and he's not afraid of actually dying?
I write this, then that, and then another one comes out. It made me confused
Brother, I would like to give you a suggestion. Just finish writing one thing. Writing a little bit of this and then that, like this, is really annoying. Moreover, the logic of the plot is messed up, and there is no room for association. Only 20% of the chapter is useful, and the remaining 80% is just water. People who are paid to read books are not, so why pay for this kind of article?
About Yi Xiaoyi's book "I'm almost invincible, are you breaking up with me?" Chapter 8 seems to have expired (Please give me flowers on the first day! Please give me evaluation votes! Please give me rewards! Please give me monthly votes! Please remind me to update!) Chapter review.
If you don't kill that woman with one sword, you won't be able to look down on you.
Personal opinion, I know the author wants to string them together later, but I feel that the three threads are too many, and the three threads are either familiar with these characters, which is what happens after the 100th chapter of the book, or it is making a movie. In short, it seems messy when you do this, maybe my brain is not working well. After reading, I have forgotten who some people are, and there is nothing to do with her in the main plot for the time being, but as you keep writing, you are very confused. You are confused now. I write about cats, sometimes from the perspective of the protagonist, now from the church, now from the club, now from the ex-girlfriend. At least it has a bit of focus. If you stick to the last one, he is very handsome. I don't know how to say this. Anyway, you haven't written that yet. I just feel uncomfortable when I look at it now, and the plot is very slow. Plus multi-threading, I have forgotten about people. What am I writing now? Awakening, Xiaoluo took in a younger brother, and now he starts to clean up the cult. That's it, it has been so long.
In other words, there are too many things that I want to express at once, and then I add one more thing and it looks messy and watery. There is absolutely no need to do it this way. In fact, the look and feel is not very good.
About Yi Xiaoyi's book "I'm almost invincible, are you breaking up with me?" Chapter 1 The ultimate bad mouth, the ultimate enjoyment. (Please give me flowers on the first day! Please give me evaluation votes! Please give me rewards! Please give me monthly votes! Please give me reminders for updates! Chapter reviews.
About Yi Xiaoyi's book "I'm almost invincible, are you breaking up with me?" Chapter 38 Auntie me! I really love you to death! (Please give me flowers! Please give me evaluation votes! Please give me rewards! Please give me monthly votes! Please give me reminders for updates! Chapter reviews.