Great Qin Showdown: The Whole Nation Cultivates Immortality, and the First Emperor Is Green With Envy

The characters in the plot talk too much and seem too stupid. You know, apart from their vision, ancient people were not low in wisdom at all. . Especially the ruling class. . . Li Si's intelligence cannot be low. . . Keep questioning, and then keep regretting your doubts. . The key is, with an immortal and everyone living so long, normal people will know that there must be changes, and ask directly, but in the end they pretend not to ask, and then pretend that they don't make any guesses. Just questioning it there seems to be too stupid for Li Si and others.

Author, it is a bit exaggerated for Zhao State to dispatch an army of 500,000 people. In the Battle of Changping alone, the Zhao State had 450,000 killed by Bai Qikeng. According to the protagonist's timeline, it was no more than fifteen years after the Battle of Changping. The Zhao State could only recruit about 300,000 soldiers with the strength of the whole country, and no more than 45 of them could survive. And Sun Tzu's Art of War said that generally speaking, the attacking force must be greater than the defender's, unless it can compete with Sun Tzu's Art of War with the blessing of black technology. Although the Qin State has the overbearing machine skills of public losers, the Mohists will definitely help the six countries, and the non-offensive machine arts of the Mohists are specifically used for defense. In order to set off the power of the protagonist, there is no need to exaggerate the power of Shandong. Although you are writing a novel about fictional history, you should try to follow the real history for details like this.

Can you please stop yawning? I don't think it's pretentious, I just think there's something wrong with the protagonist's brain.

I hope I can kill Donghuang Taiyi in the original world in the future. It's too embarrassing. Brother Zheng in the original world can teach immortality, but Donghuang Taiyi is not necessary.

There are too many questions, can you reduce them a bit? My head hurts from looking at it

The author, you said this sentence about Qin Tongshou, which made me laugh so hard that I looked like a n beast, hahaha

That's almost it. It's unreasonable to make Zhao Guo so powerful.

Compared with Wen Feilu, there are already many better ones, such as Da Qin, Ninja, Genshin Impact, etc.

It is rare to find a novel about comparing Da Qin. Although the mysterious plot is getting more and more complicated, the modeling has never let us down. In the original animation, the author must not forget to ask the protagonist to include Concubine Yan, Moon God, Xiao Meng, High Priest Loulan, Little Yu Ji, Duan Mu Rong, Hong Lian, Ming Zhu Madam, Yan Ling Ji, Jing Salamander, Tian Yan, Lian Yi, Tian Mi, Da Siming and Shao Siming, Nong Yu, Zi Nu, Li Wu, Madam Hu, Hu Meiren, Ying Ge, Ehuang Nuying, etc., To have them included in the harem.

What you wrote about Da Qin Xiu Xian is very good.