Siheyuan: The Rise of a Master Chef in the Capital

This must be the reason why it doesn't read smoothly. It's impossible to write like this.

The author goes back and reads it himself. Can you continue reading???

This is a heavenly book, and it will make a normal person's head hurt when reading it. I guess the author would have a hard time reading his own book and would not be able to understand it.

Is it because you have been away for ** years that you can't write the plot? You have to start from ** year, can't you **? Does it start before Jia Dongxuan's death?

If you can't write, don't write! Waste of feelings

This is all a mess

There's a lot of nonsense here.

Let's not talk about how shameless it is to ask Sha Zhu to provide for their three brothers in their old age. Let's just say that the third uncle didn't give the money from collecting rags and selling them to Sha Zhu? How shameless can a scholar be if he picks up rags by himself and let Silly Zhu see him? He kills people, takes advantage of you, and makes you feel guilty about him. What a good plan.

When I see the story about the third uncle being a good person, I am crazy. The first person to buy a bicycle and TV shows that the salary is wrong. The salary cannot be more than 20 yuan. Accepting gifts without doing anything and not even mentioning them shows that there is a problem with his character and everyone is having a hard time. The protagonist is rich and it is better for ordinary people to let him plunder it, which makes things worse.

The whole article is the same. In our school, this sentence accounts for 50% of each chapter. Even elementary school students can write better than this.