Zongwu: I, Xiao Xuan, Prince of Lanling

For someone who tried to sleep with his woman twice and almost destroyed his wife's family, I just wanted to scare him, but he was afraid that he would be frightened to death and take responsibility for it, and finally let him go. It's very poisonous.

When will this kind of novel stop mentioning Li Hanyi? Without her, wouldn't there be other beauties? Anyone who writes about Li Hanyi will be treated as a gift boy.

The original Tianzun had a fight with his nephew (Yunxiao Bixiao Qiongxiao) because his apprentice was in the lower world. Who would protect him?

What do you think when a 5-year-old child tells the author about marrying a wife and having children? Still have a 15-year agreement? I'm afraid Li Hanyi may have taken it as a joke. He's really brainless. Earlier, the master said that he is a master among masters who are above the first level. A few chapters later, a little servant is in a comfortable state. You really have it.

Aren't you going to type this out in Zongheng?

This is a gift for a girl. It depends on what you write next.

It's strange that someone actually writes about Warhammer. Come on, author.

His mind wanders like a Chinese cabbage, speechless

Brother, are you sure you are extinguishing cigarettes and not gathering people to smoke?

Do Taoist people learn Luohan Quan? Why don't you become a monk and imitate Zhuangzi? There are too many flaws and it is not suitable to watch.

Author, you wrote in your introduction that the protagonist has no qualifications, but Mr. Feng Shui actually discovered the qualifications of the protagonist's Green Thunder Spirit Body more than ten years ago. You must know that even the low-level Thunder Spirit Body is a genius in the age of the end of law. Not to mention the top-grade Thunder Spirit Body, even in the era of strong spiritual energy, he is a genius. It is obvious that Uncle Jiu will not accept the protagonist because he has no qualifications. How do you come back here? You must know that Uncle Jiu's senior brother Shi Jian's physique is not as good as the Thunder Spirit Body.

Every time I see this kind of writing where the main character is a teenager, and he is dating a woman who is many years older than me, I feel so inconsistent.

To be honest, the subject matter is not bad, but the author felt a little bit too lazy in the first four chapters. There are two most important places! First, can Heaven allow you to go before it was born? Second, isn't the so-called innate merit not the great merit before the birth of the way of heaven? Why does Nuwa also have innate merits? By the way, is innate here just a word that anyone can use? Third, after all, Pigfoot is a Chaos Demon God who survived the creation of the world. Not to mention that the injury did not heal after receiving the merits, but after being promoted by the merits, you turned out to be a Daluo Jinxian. Isn't it too embarrassing? ! Is this even looking at a hammer? ! ! !

The Celestial Dragons destroyed a country in three years. You navy can't be more righteous.

The author is also tj, and the book about tomb robbers is also tj. Which of your books has a normal ending?

这玩意可以不信，但你不能没有敬畏之心，特别是农村，我也是在农村出来的看到的也就一起算比较不好的事情，也可能是我的幻觉，我现在也不信但我有敬畏之心。去别的地方我都会尊从当地的**俗，就当是心安吧

This plot is so dragging, it's said that there is no brotherhood anymore, and they are killed directly, and they are still being provoked. Keep your diaphragm to respond to people, you can have sex

If you don't want to write about you, just be a eunuch, you're going to do this. One chapter a day to kill the beggars

What the hell is this ending written about? I'm speechless.

The author, the protagonist's woman must become an immortal, otherwise it will happen: On the top of the mountain, I stood, but when I looked back, I didn't have a single relative to accompany me.

I want to try it myself

The protagonist and the stallion, yes, have no brains. They are basically losers. They have no bottom line and only vent their desires.

No matter how you write a book as an author, do you have to finish it seriously? Be sure to have a beginning and an end. Who will read your book and give you advice after everything is over?

Can you update it more? It's not enough to read those two books. Why don't you update them?

I hope the author writes better and better

It's so embarrassing to watch. Holy shit, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, then you shouldn't write them, right? Damn it, the emotion that just finished killing people and worshiping people, dissipated so quickly? The murderous look in his eyes suddenly disappeared? Fairy sister, holy shit

I don't understand the gratuitous plot and want to kill the White Snake Immortal? Is there any benefit? Why don't you kill all the toad balls?

The emperor's teacher is called emperorshi

The first chapter is annoying. The five major alliances also have a stick country and a devil country respectively. There are so many countries in the world, what ability do they have to rank in the top five? Although it is a novel, juxtaposing them with our country really makes me feel angry. I am not targeting the author or the book, let me make it clear! !

What's going on with the fantasy chapter? It's not connected anymore?