
Daming: I, Zhu Yue, Inherit the Magic Machine and a Hundred Refinements at the Beginning
大明:我朱栎,开局继承神机百炼
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- Completed
- Length
- 3.9M Words
- Genre
- Military & History
- Subgenre
- Time Travel
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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20.3MReads
422.2kFlowers
9.6 · 3.8kScore
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The previous plot of releasing the whole sex is definitely not a release, but it is more or less aggrieved. If someone wants to kill you, you just beat him up?
Usually the protagonists in this type of genre are weak and weak. It would be difficult to invest in the golden elixir even if it takes ten thousand years, and it will definitely suppress the protagonist's combat power. What kind of golden elixir cultivation can defeat the Grand Master? He is just like those nuclear bomb saints.
If the protagonist wants to save people, be more serious. Don't talk about disasters. If others don't believe you, you are talking nonsense. The elixir you practice can't be seen as magical at all. It's like poison. Who dares to believe it if you haven't seen the effect of the medicine with your own eyes? If you don't want to save, don't save. You have no idea of continuing to do this. I *, everyone is free to do as you like?–_–?
In ancient times, being an emperor was useless. Every day, you would be annoyed by national affairs. In such a backward rule, there was only bad things but no good.
Regarding Zhu Biao, I can only say that if the author wants you to die, you must die. After the protagonist obtains the system, he becomes a puppet with no subjective initiative and acts like a retard. The blame is placed on the other brothers and Zhu Yunwen, and they don't think about what they could have done in this situation. Zhu Chongba's simulation itself has problems. After simulating it once or twice, you should know the problems of civil servants. It's a pity that the author has failed in history and has not watched the TV series carefully.
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Perfect Covering the Sky, no matter how much he brags about the Great Emperor's skills, is still inferior to the main character, Great Luo Jinxian, that's why I started watching it. Just want to complain. Could it be that Li Chungang's swordsmanship, the twenty-three swords and the holy sword, killed the prehistoric heaven with one sword and killed the perfect immortal emperor with two swords, even above the sky? Even if your understanding is incredible, it is not a modifier. Wuyu can use any technique, and a golden bell cover is comparable to the Chaos Clock instead of the physical body. It can only be said that chat members only half affect people's mood.
Are rotten trees immortal trees? What kind of top-level understanding is this?
The author has become a bitch and wants to erect a memorial arch. It's really annoying to see.
Taoist boy, Taoist priest, Taoist master, real person, heavenly master. The Celestial Master here is not appropriate, just like the head of a monk's temple is called abbot, or the head of a Taoist temple is called temple master, it is just a title. It is recommended to change it to a Taoist boy who refines essence, a Taoist priest who transforms Qi, a Taoist master who practices Qi, and becomes a real person. Then there is the realm of God. The Taoist Lord who refines gods with small magical powers, the Taoist King who returns to the void with magical powers, the Taoist Master who refines voids with great magical powers, and the Taoist ancestor who combines Taoism with supreme magical powers. You can refer to the magical power of Tiangang and Earthly Evil, so that you can clear the water again, otherwise it will feel like you have nothing to write about later.
What has happened after 500 years of development? How many years has it taken us to explore the history of modern development by ourselves? Give a system and then still stand on the shoulders of giants, and the result is still like this. The more you look at it, the more boring it becomes. What have you done in the past few hundred years? What kind of corpse king is there? You need technology but no technology, and you can't farm. You behave like a social idiot, drinking and chatting. This plot is not good.
I feel that the original Tianzun has almost no IQ. The protagonist killed the saint for his apprentice and forced Tiandao to perform a universal celebration special effect Hongjun. He was obviously stronger than Tiandao. Could Yuan Yu still trick Ya and his disciples into going to Xiqi to die?
The Tongtianlu belongs to the Tongtianlu. Without the runes, it is useless for the protagonist to have the Tongtianlu.
(*, A kind of plant) Why does it change when a woman appears?
The author is probably an orphan. Is there such a cousin? They slept together in junior high school. The parents of these two people also have mental problems. They are adults and they still sleep together. What are they thinking in their heads?
I didn't say you can't use both hands to make your own wife first. Then go to alchemy. Don't know how to adapt. The plot logic collapsed
Good guy, what are some of the things in these comments? To put it nicely, they are naive, to put it worst, they are brainless idiots. What kind of shitty brotherhood they are, they are all useless in the face of power.
I'm writing something! I don't even know what I want to express. . Nowadays novels are like this, they have no core idea at all! Hu Jier writes!
Where do so many NCs come from? Are you still sympathetic to Ying Zheng? Do you really think you are in the same class as Ying Zheng? Nt
Your golden finger might as well be replaced by a farm
Why would a person who wants to become an immortal still want to be a mortal emperor? Don't you want to delay your own cultivation?
The first king of Han in the Ming Dynasty was Zhu Gaoxu! Zhu Yue seems to have no such person! Zhu Yuanzhang's ninth son: Zhu Qi, died early, and was granted the title of King of Zhao
Description: Bringing two oil bottles
I'm really not saying that the development of your plot is a bit slow and makes it uncomfortable and tiring to watch.
The author must be afraid of me in reality
The Hongzhi ZTE that pleases civil servants, and the ZTE that loses its territory?
Alicia, it would be boring if the treasure recognition were not the original one.
It's the story about Visas going to other bad worlds
Why doesn't the heroine need to be original? It feels better to use originality. Because all the celebrities are married and have children, and you still write it as the heroine, it doesn't feel good. . . .
Update soon, these heroines will regret it to their death.