
Wuxia Crossover: I Start as a Woman, Dongfang Bubai
综武:开局女身东方不败
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 707k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Updated
- 5d ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
357Chapters
7.6MReads
79.2kFlowers
9.1Score
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Is the author a female? Or is he just a man who wants to be a woman?? There is no problem with Dongfang Bubai, but the protagonist is obviously a man who traveled through time in the modern era! As a result, her behavior is too feminine, and she really likes to die. It can be seen that the author has deliberately set up a lot of things, which is to make the protagonist as Hong Kong version of the Oriental Invincible... Including the fact that he is very greedy for wine. Every time he is either slightly drunk or completely drunk, the question becomes: Isn't the protagonist afraid of being poisoned?? Aren't you afraid that the master will molest or kill the protagonist when you are drunk??? You have to force yourself to drink and get drunk, right? Otherwise, you're afraid that others will think that you, the protagonist, are not like the Hong Kong version of Oriental Invincible!!!?? So are readers coming to see Brigitte Lin's version or the modern male protagonist's time travel? You are totally trying to fool yourself!! Despite the loneliness, the essence is still Brigitte Lin's version of the Eastern Invincible!!!!!!
You haven't written about realm after reading more than ten chapters? Moreover, the battle scenes described are not dazzling, and give people the impression that the writing is low-level martial arts, just like there are no special effects in movies and TV series!
Write every aspect clearly, be careful with typos, write sentences smoothly, and write carefully before and after. Don't write according to the plot. It's all a combination of martial arts. There are so many countries and forces. The plot must not be the same. Don't be wordy. Write better about fighting.
After reading a few films, I found that the character of the protagonist is not likable. This is the biggest flaw. It doesn't have the flavor of Fei Lu Shuang's novel. Have you ever heard of a saying that, when the sun rises in the east, I am the only one who is undefeated? After looking at a few more pictures, the character is still like this. To be honest, no matter how many chapters you write, this book will definitely be mailed.
Wouldn't it be easy to get into trouble by traveling through time as a woman and then hanging out alone? Even if you disguise yourself as a woman, it's okay? Just put on a veil and go out.
I feel like the protagonist was a woman before time travel, otherwise it would be impossible for her character to change directly into a woman after time travel. It would feel awkward if other people wore a man's clothes as a woman, but the protagonist of this book has no sense of disobedience. However, this character is not consistent with Dongfang Bubai, and is not heroic. If the real soul is a man, all four attributes of the Golden Finger will be full. The protagonist still has a bit of womanly kindness, and the protagonist does not have a sister, Yilin.
How can I put it, after reading it, I felt like traveling to another world, relaxed and happy, and of course I couldn't help but have the urge to become a woman, haha
Why don't you say a few words, the author?
I'm so angry, my Chihiro is gone, I'm convinced, I'm wasting my money, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry, I'm so angry
The first part was good, but the second part feels like the book has been changed directly, and the protagonist has become the background. No, others don't even know her background. A system cheat to upgrade the martial arts novel, and the second part is forcibly integrated into the longevity flow in the background mode. Has the author been changed?