Ascend to the Throne and Become a King: Yingjiang, Don't Be a Coward

To be honest, the scenes between Ning Wang and Ah Shui in the latest chapters are not very good. It is understandable that the author probably likes these two people very much, but first of all, readers may not like them; secondly, the protagonist of your book is a girl, who interacts too much with men and is always coveted. For readers, the gay taste is too strong. Unless you want to take the route of remarrying, it is recommended not to have too much contact with male characters. The interactions between normal teammates As long as it's popular, you can rewrite the posts between the female characters; finally, it's really a failure to design a brother who plays too big a role for the protagonist. No one wants to see the friendly interaction between the beautiful girl heroine and the ugly brother, but you have written it to this point, and I can't say how to change it. Unless you don't go to ig in the end, I can only suggest that you try to find ways to downplay Prince Ning's "brother power" in the future. Male readers really can't stand this.

There is no sense of immersion in another world, alas

"Catching bullets with bare hands, the police asked me to file a report" about a peasant woman who felt a little painful after three punches. 014: System reward! Iron shirt with golden bell cover! (Please give me flowers) Chapter review.

You wrote it like this from the beginning, and there is no geographical location. There is no country. Well, let's hit it from the beginning.

Chapter 39: Kuuga's ultimate power about "National Job Change: Knight Binding System at the Start" written by Ying Renzuo! Sublimated form! (Begging for data) Chapter review.

Xiong Er's younger brother, Xiong has no

Commentary on Chapter 4: The Outbreak of War, "Ascend to the Throne as King: Don't Be a Coward, Eagle Sauce" written by Super Gourmet.