Wuxia: Huang Rong's Mother Forces a Marriage, and Li Hanyi Gets Jealous

The rest of the writing is very good, but you have only spent five hundred years cultivating your internal strength to break through from innate to master. Don't you think it's too weak? How much does it cost for a Grandmaster to break through to Grand Master? What about higher?

Feng Heng is about to wake up anyway, so the hero should let Huang Yaoshi die quickly. Then the male protagonist avenges Huang Yaoshi and will definitely get the gratitude of Feng Heng, Huang Rong and Guo Xiang! The male protagonist found another opportunity to take the three of them together. Let Feng Heng and Huang Rong get pregnant with the hero's child quickly, so that Feng Heng and Huang Rong can be devoted to the hero! After Feng Heng and Huang Rong become pregnant with the male protagonist's child, the male protagonist will just stay on Peach Blossom Island. It can not only take care of the pregnant mother and daughter Feng Heng and Huang Rong, but also help Guo Xiang improve her cultivation and increase her relationship. The main thing is that I feel that the martial arts skills of the male protagonist are still too low! If the male protagonist wants to recruit more female protagonists, he can take them back to Peach Blossom Island or other places to improve his martial arts first.

The three protagonists, Huang Rong and Guo Xiang, have two horses. Wouldn't it be enough for Huang Rong and Guo Xiang to have one horse? Why do you say that two horses are not enough? After a long time, five-year-old Guo Xiang has a horse by herself. If you really have any ideas, you should buy a horse. You will know at a glance that your IQ is worrying. Also, my father refers to my own father, and my father-in-law refers to the other party's father.

I was poisoned from the very beginning. You are an innate person who can also use Ten Thousand Swords to Return to the Sect, but your winning rate against several acquired warriors is only 80%. So you can't beat even if you are innate and don't know how to fight.

There were typos and omissions in the first few chapters, and the inconsistency made it difficult to read, and the intelligence was also greatly reduced. The protagonist and Huang Rong, mother and daughter, were riding on horseback. Guo Xiang said that he had a horse with the protagonist, and Huang Rong said that men and women were not intimate, and then she rode with the protagonist. It really made me laugh. Are they fools? Mother and daughter cannot be on the same horse, Huang Rong is still known as the female Zhuge

After reading the first chapter, I realized that I don't know what happens next to the protagonist, but you, the author, are real sand dollars. You wrote with the thought that you only had an 80% chance of winning, so you couldn't be more cautious, but look at how you wrote. Defeat the enemy first and attack by sneak attack, right? Do you have to jump out and tell the enemy that you are coming? The protagonist in your story "Tuma Ma" is a modern person, and this is a life-and-death fight, not a martial arts competition. Why, you still want to say, "I am so-and-so, please enlighten me?" You are not pretending to be a pen, you are a sand dollar. Faced with different situations, how can you deal with them without knowing how to write, and you can only write and pretend to be pen? Times have changed. If you want to make money by writing books, just be a little careful. No one's money comes from the strong wind. If you write poorly and have problems, if readers don't criticize you, who will? You don't even have anyone to defend you. Do you still think you write well?

I didn't believe in the comment section at first, so I took a look at it. It takes 500 years of cultivation to become a grandmaster. According to the advanced levels you mentioned, it will take hundreds of millions of years of cultivation to reach it. Martial arts cultivation is even more exaggerated than immortality.

The requirements are not high. The main text is the same as the introduction. It is updated every day starting from four times. After all, I am a carnivorous reader. I will order all of them.

Who can become a master within five hundred years? A pig can become a master even after five hundred years.

The writing style is average and there are many incomprehensible places. It's like two horses. Why doesn't Huang Rong ride one with Guo Xiang but has to ride one with Pig's Foot? And are you sure a five or six year old can ride a horse that far?? But it's not a big problem. I'm a pervert anyway. I'm only looking at the perverted part. The writing still needs to be improved, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable to read.