After I Became the Villain, the Immortals Chased Their Exes to the Ends of the Earth

Licking one is called licking*, licking so much is called licking* and licking so many is called licking*.

The plot is a bit delayed. Isn't it the chase of the husband at the crematorium? What the protagonist does after that really doesn't look like someone who has become a demon. Moreover, the protagonist is a time traveler. After ordinary people suddenly gain powerful power, they will naturally "do whatever they want" like the people of the motherland. The first time the protagonist takes action after becoming a demon is to kill someone after being provoked. The protagonist should be more domineering after turning into a black man. He will kill you regardless of the reason, right or wrong. In addition, it is suggested that the author can learn from other philosophical villains such as Pluto and Aizen, as well as Qi Tongwei and Gao Qiqiang. Moreover, other people's experience seems to be that other people don't know that the protagonist is a time traveler. In their view, the protagonist is in love but cannot return, so he is on the road of no return. Finally, I hope the author can make the plot progress faster, and let the heroines meet the protagonist earlier and stage the crematorium to chase their husbands. Otherwise, if the word count is too low, no one will read it until it is released.

After reading this introduction, the reader still wants to read the next part, and also wants to see the female reverse. In reality, it's all about licking. She's dreaming. Don't think too much about ATM.

The writing itself is off topic, chasing a husband? You are a time traveler, you are chasing a husband, you have nothing to do with them, no car, no regrets, in short it is inexplicable. Well, you didn't work hard enough and didn't become an indispensable part of their lives. If you want them to regret it, you must have something that they can't live without. Otherwise, licking Gou will always be licking Gou, and they won't care about you. Change her life subtly, so that when she leaves you, she realizes that you are indispensable and realizes that she can no longer live without you. Only in this way will she have the logic to pursue you. Or she suddenly becomes stronger after you leave, and she realizes that she has missed such a huge treasure, and she may chase you after being unwilling to do so. They have to have logic to pursue you. In the current writing, the protagonist delivers pills or life-saving graces. If they really care, they won't treat their predecessors like that. As for pursuing a husband? What does my wanting to bring him back to immortality have to do with pursuing my husband?

Don't lick it hard enough and reject it hard enough, it will become a monster for no reason!

It's okay, but the male protagonist should be made more handsome. After entering the devil's path, everything in the past should be abandoned, and his personality should also change.

When a child gets into trouble, his parents coax him back?

Do you really know how someone would call themselves a fairy? Elementary school student?

Can it be written in a more exciting way, such as dragging the heroine into a demon cultivator? Otherwise, it would be really annoying to keep making up for the heroine's past identity, and there are still enemies that won't be killed? Dumo cultivates and destroys nine tribes for fun

I feel like the protagonist is like a mission robot with no emotions. If he doesn't lick*, it doesn't mean he is a eunuch.