
Martial Arts: Start with the Immortal Killing Sword and Build the Qingyun Sect
武侠:开局诛仙剑,打造青云门
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.2M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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66.6 · 10.6kScore
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I took a look at the catalog and it was so confusing. I didn't even finish a book until it was put on the shelf. It was so ridiculous.
What are you thinking? Let the prince kneel down to welcome the princess?
It has been said that the Qingyun Mountain Range is the sphere of influence of the Qingyun Sect, and others can still check it out at will. Others have already leaked the secrets and have not dealt with them. Traitors are traitors. They don't have the majesty of cultivating immortals at all. They just know how to lick. As long as their reputation is spread, they are afraid of not having any disciples. They are nothing????
I found that the author wrote the protagonists to be promiscuous, willful, suddenly cold and arrogant, indifferent to others, and have the feeling that I am the brother who has the system. These are the two extremes of the protagonist before he got the system. . . .
It's written like shit. When he had military power, he took the initiative to hand over his troops and killed his own elites. How is it possible for the emperor to cross the river and demolish the bridge just after returning to Beijing? The emperor is not a fool. Isn't he afraid that the world will say that he is not afraid of other officials in the court? The prince's brother-in-law calls himself his uncle in public. The emperor is not dead yet. Everyone is a fool. Even the protagonist is smart. In fact, the protagonist is also stupid. In your case, the relationship between monarch and minister, the relationship between ministers, and the clan relationship. All kinds of feudal era relationships and unspoken rules are bullshit.
Since the theme is Qingyunmen, the author should know what plots the readers want to see about the main female characters, right? And isn't the heroine who cultivates immortality more attractive than other female martial arts characters? Leaving Xue Qi alone to have an affair with other female martial arts characters is like picking up sesame seeds and losing the watermelon?
I can't write a great fusion martial arts story completely, so I still have to write it, just because I don't have to use my brain?
I just watched 20 pictures. When will the main character turn to porn?
The Great Dao Golden Pill transformed the physique, but there was no divine body, holy body, immortal body, etc., Not even the most common innate Dao body, and they dared to call it the Great Dao Golden Pill! ! ! !
Can Murong Fu reach the realm of celestial phenomena? This is the most awesome Nan Murong I have ever seen.
What kind of things do you have to accept as a disciple? You don't care about character at all when you recruit a disciple, right?
It's really stupid, use a supercomputer as your understanding
He actually studied the presence of bears. Alas, the world is declining and people's hearts are not as old as they used to be! I have already seen the appearance of Tian Tianwei. Is Zhao Lin too young? The author is still a lolita control.
If you don't have a harem if you use comprehensive martial arts, you will be a eunuch.
The author of the novel is mentally ill. He can cultivate immortality in his own sect instead of cultivating immortality for other juniors. When you ascend, all forces will 100% destroy your sect. In a thousand years, there will be people fighting for the ruins of the Qingyun Holy Land. Is this what you think?
Let's give Shennong Rui a review
Speechless, everyone thinks that the supreme divinity can be analyzed and defeated. If you have this ability, you should become a star god.
Damn it, please write this outline on your work. It looks like water, and I'm so confused. **
The first chapter is a bit misleading.
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Didn't Yi Zhonghai freeze to death?
Hongzhi's resurgence is simply a joke, not as good as Emperor Zhengde. Emperor Zhengde's death is inseparable from Emperor Hongzhi's death. Emperor Hongzhi abolished the pattern of equal emphasis on civil and military affairs and changed it to using civility to control military affairs. Even the army had literati, so that the literati family became the dominant one. Emperor Zhengde paid with his life. He personally led the army and improved the status of the military, which completely harmed the interests of the literati. Emperor Zhengde died unjustly. An emperor who could personally lead his troops into battle fell into the water and died of illness.
In order to highlight the protagonist, everyone's IQ is not online. This is okay, but can you not make every shock like being struck by lightning, and simulate thunder? It is very dramatic to listen to the book.
Shouldn't he be called emperor?
What happened to the Shokugeki? One was supposed to enter Totsuki, and the other was indeed a slave. They both agreed to such unfair conditions. Is the protagonist a central air conditioner?
Danguanxiangqing is a derogatory term and should not be used indiscriminately.
Come on update, all the tickets will be given to you
After finishing writing, if there are any typos or omissions, please check them. I saw them several times in one page, which is quite good. There are so many typos and omissions in a book**!
Come on, there hasn't been a good book in the supernatural zone for a long time, New Hope