Martial Arts: Steal Huang Rong and Suppress the Stronghold, and the Start Will Be Unbreakable

I felt embarrassed after reading the introduction. Is there such a high-profile scientist? He also sent troops to protect him. Is it necessary to go so far in his own country? He is afraid that others will not know his importance, right? If it is really important, he has already tightly blocked the news and strictly protected himself from contact with the outside world. He still goes shopping and goes to school. How funny? (￣▽￣?)

I have been following the original work, except for the narrator complaining, the plot has not changed at all.

Xiao Tian, ​​Ye Tian, ​​Liansheng? Who is the protagonist?

The author I hate the most is Lin Pingzhi, who is poisonous. Stop watching Lin Pingzhi. **Spicy Spicy** book

Is the protagonist a bandit or a monk? You write about bandits and monks at one time, which makes me confused. Should the author be so perfunctory with me?

Go to **, let's not talk about other things first, don't use idioms if you are not educated, the mentally retarded author, Chu Liuxiang's words made Ye Tian's face change three times, but Ye Tian remained calm

*Look at Feng Jin, if you have read the book, come over and give it a thumbs up, funny face

The article is too messy and the writing is not fluent.

The subject matter is quite good and the idea is good. Unfortunately, the writing skills are too poor and the writing is so messed up. I hope someone can rewrite it with a similar theme.

This book can be read by beginners like elementary school and junior high school students, but bookworms should not fall into it. The author does not know much about martial arts, and may not be able to distinguish between martial arts, fairy tales, fantasy, and mythology. In the second chapter, they used nine bulls and two tigers. Don't you know that Li Yuanba can't do four things? Question: Li Yuanba is a myth and legend! Only the reincarnation of Garuda has the power of 25 tons of pure physical power that cannot be surpassed by the Four Elephants, while the Nine Ox and Two Tigers have 12.5 Tons of pure physical power. It takes a genius of Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu to reach the 13th level in a thousand years to gain 6.25 Tons of physical power. You can basically sweep the world of mixed martial arts with just the power of nine oxen and two tigers. There may be a few special points that can resist it, but absolutely no one is your opponent. The nine oxen, two tigers plus the dragon and elephant are 18.75 Tons. The golden cudgel used by Sun Wukong who fought all the way to Nantianmen is only 6.75 Tons.

This author is so awesome that he can continue to write more than 2,000 chapters despite being said to be like this.

Most of your new chapter is repetitive, why is there any need to write it?

Wouldn't it be enough if you have a martial arts skill or secret book? Shouldn't the focus be on realm? You have to do all kinds of shitty martial arts. You can be a gun master, a swordsman, or a swordsman. What the hell are you doing! Is it useful?

The battles are too tight and it feels like you're doing nothing but drawing lots of fights here and there.

Qingcheng is the main branch of Taoism, and in Jin Yong's book Qingcheng seems to have been active from Tianlong to Xiaoao, and has always been a big sect.

Huamanlou is the seventh child, not a young man

I can't see clearly. I feel like I've repeated myself a lot. My eyes are so tired.

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