
Ultimate Series: Obtain Flame Spear Chongli at the Beginning
终极系列:开局获得炎枪重黎
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- Completed
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- 2.3M Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Film & TV Fanfiction
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- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Faloo
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Recently, some brothers said that some female protagonists are too young. I have also thought about this issue. It is indeed my mistake. Although I wrote down the age when I wrote it, I still used it according to the age of the final three when interacting. Therefore, some places may not be reasonable. I would like to apologize to everyone in advance. In the future, I will reduce the interaction with female protagonists who are too young. When I write the final three, I will add more interactions as compensation. Thank you to those brothers who raised this issue.
I kept whining until I got to Chapter 10, where the ink mark was, and ended up discussing where Xu Damao had gone. . . . I have to arrange a late night snack, and then attract Lou Zi, who is convinced, a lump
Is Wang Dadong more important than your girlfriend?
I'd like to ask everyone if An Qi will be accepted. I'm not too fond of An Qi and I think she looks just like that. If you feel average about An Qi, I'll arrange it for Dadong.
After reading many reviews of the book, what I care about the most is the setting of invincibility at the beginning. I like to be invincible at the beginning and then hit the waves. I mean it sincerely. If there is another system after traveling through time, I would like to ask those of you who don't like invincibility at the beginning. When you arrive in a different world, but you are a noob at the beginning, do you want to practice up to it? Some people think that cultivation is easy because you are not an indigenous person, you do not have the language and knowledge of another world, and you do not understand anything. The novel is pure nonsense and this process is completely nonsense. There are many books that will not mention this situation. Reality time travel is not as easy as the book says. There is a system that is not necessarily the protagonist, but may also be someone else's leek.
The lj setting of the protagonist always taking one step slowly,,, it's really ** here, if this was done elsewhere, it would definitely be popular
Yesterday I posted a total of three chapters, and three of them were blocked. I accepted it. I just finished revising it and it's out. I apologize to those who subscribed automatically. It's really hard to drive.
I hope to write Ultimate 2 so that Chong Li can wake up soon
It's finally out, bro, the blocked chapter is finally out! I'm really convinced by Feilu's review. It's too slow and messy. I can't write this, and that one can't be reviewed. I'm really convinced. Now it's finally released. It's affected everyone's experience these days. I want to apologize to everyone. Sorry! ! ! Everyone! ! !
I remember that there was a fire ant girl in the Ultimate Family. I remember that this girl was pretty good-looking, but the key was that she was a jk. Don't forget the author, even though that character wasn't even the main supporting character.
I just don't understand why the protagonist is always a step behind? Hua Fulong, Tian Xin, Qiu Qiu, they always get tired of this routine. Hua Fulong is better. After Tian Xin was kidnapped and tied up in the warehouse, the guy wanted to take advantage. Why don't you think about whether the kidnapper took advantage in the car? And who tied up Tian Xin in the warehouse? If there's no need to write it, just don't put poison in it, okay? And Qiu Qiu, he wouldn't have come here long ago after being bullied like this. What's the use of coming after he's done bullying? Later, An Qi, you said that you wanted to make some arrangements and that it would be more comfortable. In the end, I wanted to add some spice and mess around. Although An Qi is not the protagonist, isn't this the CP you wrote for Wang Dadong? Do you find it interesting that you always write such marginalia like this?
Commentary on Chapter 20: A Really Arrogant Guy in "Tennis: Starting from the Six Paths" written by Dark Night Walker.