Mohist Reform: Scientists Were Born in the Qin Dynasty

The protagonist's self-destruction of the identity of the time traveler is really a poisonous point, which makes people speechless. Is your level so bad that you can't find other reasonable reasons to explain the protagonist's thoughts? If you've only known someone for five or six days and don't know your past, can't you make up a reliable explanation?

The first three chapters were fine, but in the fourth chapter, he said he came from two thousand years in the future? Speechless!

It's poisonous. In the first chapter, he said that he didn't even have a girlfriend. Later, when he returned to the city to buy a house, he met his ex-girlfriend, and then he got slapped in the face again. ... Author, you have a good word count, and the main character is invincible. I don't see some parts in the back at all. What do you want, a little brother, a bit like a holy mother?

What about other countries? Do you have any ideas while watching Qin's reforms? The author understands that this is a web article. You must at least have some climax. The current plot is too straightforward and very bland. I hope the author will add some contradictions, climaxes, character conflicts, etc. In the later stage.

After so many years, I'm still using bamboo slips. Doesn't it feel better to use paper?

Is the author a serious little black guy?(?`???)?

Just screen readers directly, right? . .

Commentary on the first chapter of "Mokist Reform: The Birth of Scientists from the Qin Dynasty" written by Tian Xia: Mohist Disaster.

Comments on Chapter 4: The Essence of Science is Earnestness, "The Mohist Reform: The Birth of Scientists from the Qin Dynasty" written by Tian Xia.

Lin Ruhai's writing is too soft. The history of salt patrol in Yangzhou will not last long without means.